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Burning Touch
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Burning Touch |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Burning Touch Heat flowing from your finger tips travelling down my face Across my brow and onto lips then down neck where pulses race I see the sparkle in your eyes now filled with passion’s fire Giving a look that can’t disguise, I respond with desire With a power that leaves me breathless you lower lips to mine I moan with the strength you possess to make heartbeats combine While I’m lost to your burning touch my visions all come true So to this dream my heart will clutch seeking for love in you Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Tender, beautiful...passionate!!This love will find you dear friend, an I will rejoice in your happiness!!! Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"seeking for love in you" your words are beautiful Karen, very romantic, and I like your new picture, floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, I think you should be writng these hot scenes for the movies. You have a vivid picture here. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow....another passion filled write... You are smoking now...the pen is hot... One clone is on the way....should arrive tomorrow... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
beautiful read Karen... |
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poeticdreamer Junior Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 46 |
A flame's strong burning wind that blows my hair back! poeticdreamer |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, this touch does indeed burn doesn't it? You convey the power in it so well. btw, love the new pic If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ See there goes another SIGH....your writings of love are amazing...HUGS....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:44 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Another passion filled creation... beautiful as usual, Karen.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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