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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-13 05:26 AM


You are the mist that lies low over the valley
Your presence moves like the wind through the trees
You're the gull that glides over the ocean
Your love is so welcome like a warm Summer's breeze

You are the first Spring flower in the meadow
After the cold of the Winter is no more
You are the falling Autumn leaves
That land softly on the grassy floor

You are the embers that burn brightly in the fire
And the reason I keep coming back for more
You are the chain of gold around my neck
And the key to my heart's door

So many images of you are all around me
Within nature you take on many a disguise
So many beautiful qualities I see
As each day holds a new surprise

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-01-13 09:00 AM



I do believe someone received a lovely necklace, for this is twice I've seen the reference, and Sue? I can feel the smile...

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-01-13 09:38 AM


Very beautifully said. Thanks.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

rosepetals25
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3 posted 2002-01-13 10:13 AM


Suetang,    
      
      Oh I love this! It's  so sweet   And the flow is perfect.  Well done

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

SmartChick
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4 posted 2002-01-13 10:24 AM


I love this. Just beautiful!
Canuckster
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5 posted 2002-01-13 10:27 AM


Fine read Sue.  Love some of these metaphores.
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6 posted 2002-01-13 11:44 AM




YAY!!! (smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, you truly are a Queen of Romance. (kiss on cheek) May he forever plant flowers in your heart and warm your heart everyday with his embers of passion! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

OLIAS
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7 posted 2002-01-13 11:53 AM


Beautiful poem, with lots of love and style I liked very much.

Regards,
Olias.

thepoeticplumber
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8 posted 2002-01-19 09:48 PM


A great story of how love can multiply in so many ways.  People should make more comparisons instead of so many times thinking about themself..
Your good friend, Roger


Startime
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9 posted 2002-01-19 09:53 PM


So very beautiful....Your heart writes love through eyes that see it in all the wonders of nature around her....absolutely magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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