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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-01-13 02:29 AM


Melodious harps and fluttering flutes,
serenading in a cascading symphony,
notes falling serendipitously,
highs and lows frolicking joyfully,
dancing syntonically
over boulders and smooth stones
in carefree fantasy,
point and counterpoint,
dreaming of the distant shores of
nevermore and forevermore,
blessing the union of hydrogen and oxygen,
mysterious magical molecules,
infusion, diffusion, illusion of
sacrificed offerings in misty delight,
quenching parched hearts and lips
in a clarity of purposefullness,
Life sustaining fluidity,
Water.
Lifeblood of the Earth.


Dedicated to the memory of all those heros who devoted their lives to protecting the lifeblood of Earth, and in particular, Jacques Cousteau and Sir Peter Blake.(Sail Away) /pip/Forum52/HTML/001566.html


May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2002-01-13 02:33 AM


A wonderful tribute Midnitesun.
Intense and passionate
and so very well written.

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2 posted 2002-01-13 02:35 AM


Midnitesun - great writing about the life blood of the earth. And bravo for Jacques Cousteau and Sir Peter Blake.

BC

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3 posted 2002-01-13 02:44 AM


Blues, thank you so much. These two men were both heros to me.

BC, thank you for your reply. We all owe a debt of gratitude to the likes of Sir Peter Blake and Jacques Cousteau.

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4 posted 2002-01-13 07:46 AM


This is fascinating and I'm thrilled to see someone mention these people.  Thank you for this.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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5 posted 2002-01-13 08:19 AM


Beautiful poem and important message Midnightsun. Our water is our lifeblood and must be protected, not only in the oceans, but on land also. We have just finished a 7 year battle with the city of Toronto, they wanted to send their garbage up north here by train and dump it in one of our lakes.We won the battle for now, but money has power these days.In my profile you will see a link to my web page, in the picture-poetry section you will find one titled "Northern Response", it was penned for this cause. Once more, BRAVO, wonderfull poem and message!!
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6 posted 2002-01-13 08:47 AM


Midnitesun,
Good thoughts, good words, good write.

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7 posted 2002-01-13 09:45 AM



Very good!

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8 posted 2002-01-13 09:52 AM


I really like this.  You make your cause by appealing to the physical senses and showing what it is you're talking about.  I heard waterfalls throughout and appreciate the skill and work you put into this.
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YAY for Jacques Cousteau and Sir Peter Blake and everyone else who continues to make the lifeblood of the Earth clean and plentiful! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful and wonderfully said, sweet friend, I love it!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2002-01-13 10:48 AM


Kacy,
I finally got it! It's all those teaching lessons you have had to plan. That's why you know all this scientific...uh, stuff.

Oh, I don't care. It's still a fun write.

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11 posted 2002-01-13 11:06 AM


Thank you all for reading this and commenting. Destruction of the rainforest, pollution of our streams and lakes, paving over watersheds and careless use of natural resources are issues we must all resolve, if we hope to keep our lifeblood safe.
Kathleen, thank you for your reply.
Brian, thanks for the comment and the link, I will read your post. Keep up the fight for clean water.
Sy, thank you for taking time to read and reply.
Sunshine, thanks, you are always here and always supportive.
Canukster, what a generously wonderful reply!
Noah, hugs, and yay is an understatement.
Larry, I've always been an 'Environmentalist' and sometimes even an 'eco-warrior' to some. But the homeschooling lessons sure do help keep focus on the critical issues of life.  

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12 posted 2002-01-13 11:31 AM


Yes, Yes, I like very much, very stylish write I enjoyed very much.

Regards,
Olias.

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13 posted 2002-01-13 11:33 AM


Very beautiful imagery.Enjoyed it!
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14 posted 2002-01-13 11:41 AM


Olias, thank you very much for the visit! Thanks for helping to keep those beautiful shores and waterways over there clean and life-giving.

Sodpossum, thank you for your visit and reply, and your personal committment to keeping Earth's lifeblood free and pure.

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15 posted 2002-01-13 12:29 PM


Kacy, this is really awesome writing friend.  Thank you for keeping their spirit and the spirit of unity alive.  Your wonderful hon, hugs.
Donna

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~Me~

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16 posted 2002-01-13 12:34 PM


"dreaming of the distant shores of
nevermore and forevermore,"

I really liked how you made water seem like a living entity.  Very good.

Dave

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17 posted 2002-01-13 12:43 PM


Kacy, this is an excellent write on a very very important topic!
Thank you for keeping the word 'out there.'
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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18 posted 2002-01-13 01:19 PM


Midnite--A beautiful poem and an important subject...thank you for this.  


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19 posted 2002-01-13 01:34 PM


Gentle spirit, thank you so much for your understanding and comment.

Dave, thank you so much, and yes, I do see it a living entity.

Nancy, thanks. Since none of us can survive long without water, it really is a very important survival topic.

Martie, thank you for reading and commenting. Your own poetry is always in touch with nature.

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20 posted 2002-01-13 01:40 PM


A wonderfully contemplative poem...yes, this is the muse of Her. A study in meditation.
Loved it.

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21 posted 2002-01-13 01:54 PM


Ah, serenity acknowledges my muse, my meditative state. Hugs and peace to you, and may the sweetest waters of life continue to flow through your heart.
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22 posted 2002-01-13 10:11 PM


Some of the words in this are longer than my poems!  Good point, Kacy and great poem.
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23 posted 2002-01-13 10:38 PM


Duncan, glad you enjoyed it. LOL at your comment about word length. Some words just pack a bigger punch.
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24 posted 2002-01-14 09:25 PM


this is just beautiful....I had the chance at 16 to do an independent study, with him through my school, with under water Photography...sadly the trip had to be cancelled....but was I thrilled to have been chosen....thanks for this....


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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25 posted 2002-01-14 11:13 PM


Lauren, thanks for sharing that. Hopefully, you found another way to do some underwater photography. But what a glorious experience that would have been, to work alongside such a giant as Cousteau!  
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