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Ven
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0 posted 2002-01-13 01:11 AM



Would You?

Would you be the cushion, to break my fall ?
Would you offer the world, if you had it all ?
Be number one fan, at my curtain call ?
Do you love me this much ?

Would you forsake all others, only for me ?
Would you trust my love, unconditionally ?
Grant me solitude, when I need to just be ?
Do you love me this much ?

Would you break, when you see me cry ?
Would my death, make you wish to die ?
Do you yearn to lay, wherever I lie ?
Do you love me this much ?

Because all the above I would be for you,
So when we fight, remember its true,
that if you bleed, then I bleed too.
Because I love you this much.

... and then some.

By ven.

© Copyright 2002 Lorraine Voss - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-01-13 01:42 AM


Ven - these are very beautiful words from someone true to their heart. I would, that's for sure...

BC

Ven
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2 posted 2002-01-13 07:54 AM


Thankyou  
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3 posted 2002-01-13 10:25 AM


Ven,

     Oh my how amazing this is! I REALLY like this! I'm so happy I stopped into read! Thank you for sharing this

Hugs,
Tara

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4 posted 2002-01-13 10:26 AM


Thanks for the window here to your heart.  The view was great.
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5 posted 2002-01-13 11:24 AM


Hi Ven, this is so so beautiful. I love it, great poem. floria
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6 posted 2002-01-13 11:33 AM




(sigh) Such faithfulness and trust shines in your love, sweet friend, acceptance and faithfulness are the most valuable virtues of eternal love! (smiles) May love shappiness forever sparkle and shine in your heart, sweet friend! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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