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Love At Thirty Thousand Feet
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Love At Thirty Thousand Feet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love At Thirty Thousand Feet I never thought that I would fall in love at thirty thousand feet but there she was sliding in right next to me as she occupied the window seat. At first I thought she was a model or a movie star. At second thought I thought that she was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen in my life so far. Perfect hair and skin and flawless nose and eyes and a body that could make a grown man cry. Alright it's absolutely true that I used so much energy looking at her that my lips failed to respond on the appropriate cue. But then I probably would have went and spoiled it all by saying something stupid like where have you been all my life sweet darling or you are the most beautiful woman I've ever seen in my life not counting my first lovely wife. Right about then all my grandiose thoughts were interupted by a very rude man saying "Julie, my sweetheart why are you sitting with this man? I was sitting in my seat wondering where you have been. Let's go hon we are two seats up in row ten." I loved the way she brushed her hands over my leg as she proceeded to stand and as she jumped into his arms I watched him grab her wandering hands. JamesLee January07 2002 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (01-12-2002 11:39 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
James...you have outdone yourself...I always have trouble getting the right words out of my face...Maybe that is why I write.... Enjoyed this.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - I just love this one. You have really written a winner with this! Can't say enought about it. It's just great... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, but all the same it also feels so wonderful to hear and see others in love too, to know they feel special and happy too! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, may you forever find true love to last eternally! We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
James, this is a great write! I guess it's a good thing you didn't say anything or you would have felt worse. Hummm....wandering hands, eh?  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
James, this is so unique, I love it. floria |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Truth… or Fantasy… ? I like it. Melton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
James,I really enjoyed this.I`m guessing this is what she looked like.   Juanita |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
James: What a way to fly - or should I say what a way to go!! I have seen a few on some of my flights and they sure did look great (men that is). Enjoyed the ride, but it was too bad that it didn't work out for you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you for the wonderful responses Magnus, Bill, Noah, Nancy, floria, Melton, Juinita and Ariana. Melton this was strictly fantasy with a touch of truth...I don't believe my girlfriend would have appreciated this really happening...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
An interesting web you weave James..brilliant work!! Nathan |
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