Open Poetry #18 |
Rhymes |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
When I drink a jeroboam, ...filled with wine sublime, I thank the Gallo brothers, ...for Sangria with a lime. I take a sip, or two, for me, ...then share, I do not mind, Wine and friends, will life sustain, ...as share a sliced lime's rind. So if you have a jeroboam, ...empty with used lime, Don't check around for Sloniker, ...was probably drunk by Tim. When I write a poem, ...I prefer that it would rhyme, If I had my druthers, ...they would rhyme for me each time. I know a word, or two, or three, ...a rhyme I will not find, Discordant end words are my bane, ...they stress my feeble mind. So if you read a poem, ...an ode that does not rhyme, Be looking for my moniker, ...was probably wrote by Tim. [This message has been edited by Tim (01-12-2002 10:17 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Tim or Time? LOL, I like this poem-I tried to write free verse once and it turned out just awful! Maybe I'll try it again, but in the meantime I'll stick with rhyme. Nicely done, Tim. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well Thyme, it's good to see your monika does that mean you are looking ofr a name change? lol Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tim, enjoyed this so much tonight. I have a terrible time with rhyme. Would rather write free verse anyday. This is good stuff! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks for the chuckles, Tim! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, I love writing in both forms, but I prefer rhyme because I love to sound catchy in how I feel! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, your words are fabulous! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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