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Change of Stance
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Change of Stance |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 Like wind chimes in an azure breeze, My feet have been caught In the undertow of your profound insight... I’ve found you...I delight in you, And engross my thoughts in the mystifying sanctuary of you. I’ve somehow stumbled upon The inexplicable harbor of unending grasp, No matter how frequent my wading. The electric sense of your ranging stability Takes me to an astounding view of the complete tides below. Like eagles on the crystal wind, My eyes have taken flight To the advanced plane of your qualified perception... I’ve caught a hint of you...I trust in you, Leaning my worn stamina on the strength of your connection. I’ve finally learned about That indescribable fervor underneath the sea, Burning in spite of the engulfing currents. The magical atmosphere of your incessant patience Brings to me the knowledge of a higher wisdom that flies overhead. -kh I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words take us on wings of love to the sky above and embracing the wisdom like the eagle you cast from your palms! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is soooooo gorgeous! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Naoh Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SP...it's been too long! So good to see you again! Welcome home! And this...wow! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Kris! So very nice to see you again! This is full of beauty and wisdom! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Exceptional work, sp. So nice to see your name here again! All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like wind chimes in an azure breeze, My feet have been caught In the undertow of your profound insight... I’ve found you...I delight in you, And engross my thoughts inthe mystifying sanctuary of you. I’ve somehow stumbled upon The inexplicable harbor of unending grasp, ======================================== Like eagles on the crystal wind, My eyes have taken flight To the advanced plane of your qualified perception... I’ve caught a hint of you...I trust in you, Leaning my worn stamina on the strength of your connection. ===================================== The magical atmosphere of your incessant patience Brings to me the knowledge of a higher wisdom that flies overhead. ============================================ OH good grief....you keep writing like this and someone is gonna need a bigger Stetson cuz his head is gonna swell  (hehe)  Well its about time you posted this gem of pen....its one of my fave so much to see in all the images and anaolgies ... its like "catching a breeze" very very cool poem Kris-girlie.... Now about that title? Change of Stance? does that mean you've gone over to the Aquarian persuausion??? ROFL Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
replying for a certain cowboy (you know the Mark guy)  Well sweetie where do I begin ... of course you know I love the imagery and your superb use of metaphor and we've all said all we can say about your well polished use of vocabulary, but yet each new poem by you just brings me that much closer getting totally lost in you. (well I guess I am already there anyway) Each time I get to hear one of your poems, or read them once I get my copy, its like taking a journey through those special moments in time reserved for only the special few who take the time to listen to the wind and when I get to take that journey thru your eyes, then its like an "E" ticket ride thru the heavens. This whole piece is written with every ounce of beauty that shines within your heart and of course the emotional impact for me is just another reminder of how much I love you and how special you always make me feel. Thank you for this, thank you for you, and thank you for "us" most of all. BTW -- my Stetson fits just fine.  Mark |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I've always enjoyed your poetry. This is no exception. It is just brilliant in joy, reads with such flow. Love the blue in the picture also, but of course blue is my favorite color! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Noah: thank you so much for your reply...I am glad you enjoyed this! Sunshine: yes, I know, I know...but thank you! good to see you! Denise: thanks! I'm glad you could stop by! LW: thank you very much! and it's great to see your name on my post, too! I appreciate it! J: thanks, girlie...I'm flattered by your words, AS USUAL..and NO NO, I'm not persuaded...the only Aquarian things I have are cheese doodles, and, well, you know...hehe... ...yeah, the picture does kinda remind ya of catching a breeze, huh?  M: and I'm sure you know what it means to me that these touch you the way they do...thank you, baby, for everything... ...love ya!!Kathleen: thank you so much for your kind reply...I love the picture as well...blue is the best, isn't it? sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe |
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