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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2002-01-12 09:05 PM


Bright crimson droplets bleed upon the page.
The life-blood of a soul in search of peace.
Were this to be full writ one might find sage,
between it's start and end some sense to it.

Yet here the middle looms larger than life,
and I a slave to fashion must obey
staid rules in face of wonderment that calls.
I hear its' voice expanding choices. Nay,

it is as if there is no choice at all,
just messages and answers to their call.

© Copyright 2002 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2002-01-12 09:18 PM


Poetry written from the heart is always beautiful and full of wisdom, no matter the form. Sometimes the rules just get in the way! Enjoyed, as always, Dr.Moose!
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2 posted 2002-01-12 09:28 PM




(sigh) So well expressed, sweet friend, this indeed does come from the heart and I believe we all become slaves of a panache every now and then, but we always have our hearts and we can become immersed in the beauty of our imaginations always! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, your words are fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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