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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-12 07:46 PM


Falling In Love With You
By: Noah Eaton
1/12/02

Hand in hand we walk on the beach
Catching the crown jewels of falling stars
Tidal waves kiss our feet with the foam of the sea
I carry you safely in my ivory arms

Under these pale bashful marionberry skies
I'll kiss your eyelids slowly as you fall asleep
Caressing your thighs, painting you in the moonbeams
Finding castles among the stars, which you and me weave

I am not perfect, but I love you so much
All I have to give is all you've ever dreamed of
We'll facillitate our dreams, I give you my hearts key
Rest with me, sweet angel, we will make sweet love

Your every sigh enlightens me in my loves mantra
I am the moth kissing the light of your heavenly abode
I don't want to miss a single flicker of your happiness
For we are two hearts with one true lovers soul

I give this rose to you, for all the love we'll share
For you are the rose of my heart, my angelic lover
Sweet Joanna, there's no feeling more lovelier
Than falling in love with you, forever and ever and ever...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-12-2002 07:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-12 07:48 PM


This is very beautiful, sweet Noah. God bless you.
-newell

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2 posted 2002-01-12 07:50 PM



"Marionberry skies"...I must go seek some of those...

beautiful imagery, Noah...I like your brevity more and more...

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3 posted 2002-01-12 07:51 PM


Ah Noah~You are such a romantic!  This is beautiful, as are all your writings.  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2002-01-12 07:55 PM


*sigh* I love it when people are falling in love and I always knew you would write incredibly romantic poems when it happened to you, Noah, and I was right...this is a romantic masterpiece. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2002-01-12 08:37 PM


Oh Noah, this was so sweet!!!  What a beautiful poem.  Joanna is a lucky girl!  Good work!
Noelle

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6 posted 2002-01-12 08:43 PM


'Under these pale bashful marionberry skies
I'll kiss your eyelids slowly as you fall asleep
Caressing your thighs, painting you in the moonbeams
Finding castles among the stars, which you and me weave'

'I am not perfect, but I love you so much'

This is beautiful, Noah...you truly have created some breathtakingly romantic images here...wonderful write from you!

sp     

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe
Until you're resting here with me...

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7 posted 2002-01-12 08:48 PM


Noah,

   This is just beautiful!!!!!! This is definately one of my favorites from you. So sweet.

Hugsssssss,
Tara

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     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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8 posted 2002-01-12 08:50 PM


Noah, You are so romantic and sincere. This is lovely. Chris

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9 posted 2002-01-12 09:02 PM


Noah...you seem to have come up a notch on the romance scale....lovely write...
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10 posted 2002-01-12 09:16 PM


Wonderful!  The type of poem that makes you sit and sigh.  
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11 posted 2002-01-12 11:44 PM


Noah - Joanna must be a very special someone. Your poems are so warm, and with caring. You are truly an artist my friend...

BC

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12 posted 2002-01-13 11:44 AM


"The crown jewels of falling stars" do you ever run out of words Noah, this is so so so lovely. floria
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13 posted 2002-01-13 12:08 PM


Noah, I almost sway in my computer chair while reading your love poems. They are so melodic and rich.
(I sure wish I had someone writing these kind of poems to me)
Sandra

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14 posted 2002-01-13 12:58 PM


Noah - Truly a beautiful romantic write.  Well done.

Dave

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15 posted 2002-01-13 02:22 PM


Lovely writing...James
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16 posted 2002-01-14 07:29 AM


So much romance, I love it.
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17 posted 2002-01-14 02:48 PM


Hey Hunny, You know, I absolutly adore this poem. I never thought that someone would feel all these beautiful emotions for ME!
Indeed, I am lucky. Love you!


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18 posted 2002-01-15 07:14 PM


Oh Noah (tear), this is so beautiful!  And written for your sweet Joanna.  There is only one love for you and she is the one.  Your heart is so beautiful, it deserves a lady like her.  Greatly written buddy, I loved it!

     Randy Meador

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19 posted 2002-01-15 07:18 PM


Very cleverly written and so very romantic as usual Noah!
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