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Wedding Lace - Haiku
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Wedding Lace - Haiku |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Beauty of bare trees lacy as old wedding gowns Springs love to renew A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is beautiful just like you. I like to write in this form too, saying a little, can mean a lot! very nice! RP |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo gorgeous, I love it, I love it, I love it! Spring being married to the beauty of nature, this is sooooo pretty! Awwwww, you always paint the most lovely visions, this is a gorgeous matrimony of love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes...a beautiful snapshot vision you paint with these words. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Ellie I love this, so nice to think of a tree like that, floria |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here, Ellie looking on my own bare trees lacing back at me |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This made me cry. (for personal reasons) it is lovely!!! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ellie, this is lovely....enjoyed so much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
after summer's green winterlace will be renewd circle of seasons You wrote a beautiful Haiku Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Thank you each and everyone!!!! I am so grateful and astonished at all these incredibly lovely replies! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
ellie - sweet and perfect. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
stripped of summer dress stark filligree pirouettes screaming in the wind your trees are more beautiful, ellie, mine would be, were it not for the chill, howling wind combing through their branches enjoyed your piece! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Elle, Beauty of your pen Renews my soul with sunshine Thank you once again. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You pen the prettiest haikus! I should start taking lessons from you  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ellie LeJeune - this is beautiful. Few words, much said... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely images ellie..btw i love the King of Prussia Mall...  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Mom, This is awesome.. I love your haikus!! ~beth |
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