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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-01-12 10:29 AM

~*~

Snippet Beginnings

~*~

Snippets of you, dear
Responsive delights of awe
Fragment beginnings

~*~

Of you, you, and you
When you thought to enchant us
Inspiration’s start

~*~

Archive to archive
Where words of tender recall
Find me once again

~*~

Passionate recall
Look for the wind to whisper
Snippets of delight

~*~

See the Challenge:
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©Karilea Rilling Jungel
12 January 2002

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-12-2002 10:41 AM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

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1 posted 2002-01-12 10:40 AM

Sunshine, I love this, Snippet, what a nice descriptive word. great poem. floria

Denise

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2 posted 2002-01-12 12:04 PM

Beautifully said, Karilea!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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3 posted 2002-01-12 12:13 PM

I tend to be drawn to any poem with "beginning" in the title
these days and I was not disappointed with this one.
It is original, fresh and left me with a great feeling

thank you!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2002-01-12 12:19 PM

I like this, now I must see about your challenge

with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-12 01:45 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may archives of sweet memories and trinkets of our joys and promises light each and every second we live! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, now it's time for me to join the fun of your challenge! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

6 posted 2002-01-12 01:49 PM

Each one is a snippet of delight to read. I love them all. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

7 posted 2002-01-12 03:08 PM

Karilea - It is true, how other poems or even snippets of poems that we read can inspire us and influence our writing. Very good.

Dave

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