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Silhouettes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Silhouettes Two silhouettes on golden beach, lovers softly embrace Far away but they can still reach with words, their hearts, will trace Two made one under setting sun, passion over the miles Eternal love that's just begun lit by intimate smiles Cool winds caress their burning flesh flushed by their unquenched fires Drinking of love's wine to refresh and fulfill deep desires Silhouettes upon dreamer's beach together in the night With yearning arms to hold, they reach, until the morning light Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...This poem is a dream of passion unfolding to the heart of the reader. Your talent is amazing!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...getting the sand out of my shoes.. (kidding)... You write such beautiful romance...at beaches, wherever...always enjoyable to read... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Two made one under setting sun, passion over the miles Eternal love that's just begun lit by intimate smiles You've written some beautiful pictures here, Karen! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good stuff happens at the beach...James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beautiful writing, karen!! i really really love this!!!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
An even better dream..you do these so well. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen, you make me envisage moonlit nights and sandy shore...and it's all good even when I am not a beach person. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, One of your best. Enjoyed |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ When I read your words of love, they give me hope for tomorrow....thanks.... always beautiful....Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"yearning until the morning light" you are such a romantic Startime. floria |
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