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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-01-11 08:49 PM



“INTO THE NIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I wake into darkness, you by my side,
kisses melt, desire beckons, breathless…
Tender, into the warm summer’s night,
a fire burns, to know your closeness…

Sweet is this passionate embrace,
tighter, as hearts touch together…
Melting into one, forever caring,
neither to part, for another…

Sighs are deep whispers of rapture,
lips parted, alluring, seductive delight…
Enticing high, this ecstasy of two,
into softness, into the night…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-01-11 08:53 PM


BC...awesome...so much passion flows from
this poem...Superb..

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2 posted 2002-01-11 09:16 PM


Very lovely Bill...always enjoy reading your words..

               ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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3 posted 2002-01-11 09:42 PM


Mmmm Bill..sensually delightful...enjoyed,  Hugs Nancy.

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4 posted 2002-01-11 09:45 PM


Bill - Very sensual, lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-01-11 09:47 PM


Bill,

    This is SOOOOOOOOOOO beautiful! *sighs* You always know how to make me swoooooon Wonderful write.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2002-01-11 10:45 PM


Bill darling boy this is without doubt this is one of your UTTER utter best.

This just flows like silk over skin truly it is so sensuous and smooth I can feel the heat coming off the page, this is truly wonderful writing

Sometimes Bill YOU astound me this is truly spectacular


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2002-01-11 10:50 PM


Bill:  WOW!!!! some lucky lady to have you write these beautiful words! Bravo!
~Roniece~

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8 posted 2002-01-11 11:09 PM




(sigh) Soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, may everyday and every night be times of eternal happiness with your love close to your heart! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-01-11 11:35 PM


Bill...This is a tender, dance of love between to hearts co-joined. The softness; yet the simmering passion beneath make this poem an explosion of deeply felt emotion.

****Ivy Rose

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10 posted 2002-01-11 11:47 PM


Sweet, soft, and very romantic, BC.  Nicely done!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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11 posted 2002-01-12 07:41 AM


This is delicious,Bill. Just the way a night should be.
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-01-12 09:22 AM


Bill,
DARN! Now I have to have cold shower before I go to bed.
Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2002-01-12 10:36 AM


Bill~

Indeed the nights should always be this way, and feel even better in the mornings....Sensual write my friend....love it!

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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