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Dare To Believe
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Dare To Believe |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada 
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Dare To Believe I streak the sky on phantom wings To cut the clouds soft face I soar where eagles wouldn’t dare To greet the darkest space How tranquil Earth does look from here Such peace I do perceive The magic of its gentle twirl Centuries does it weave Such freedom does this gift bestow What majesty I view All colors of the spectrum’s light This prolate does imbue If we could all be graced this view Then see the way it grieves I think that we could heal its woes If we dared to believe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Brian...let me just some comet cicles and cosmic dust off...enjoyed the ride...and a very good message within...thanx.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YES, YES!!! I know deep down from the bottom of my heart if we all make an effort to be blessed by what we see and embrace with wings spread out this freedom He gives us all, we can find happiness and harmony in all of our space! (big hugggsssss) I believe in it! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Brian, what a good message, very thoughtful, and written beautifully. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Brian, this one slipped past me last night and a beauty it is! Some great thoughts in this one....should be seen by more.....therefore....I shall bump thee! ~Hugs and waves toward the north, Nancy~  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yesh, it is true! If we dare to believe, we can perform miracles! If only..._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Brian this is wonderful. The beauty of the earth indeed, I treasure it and write of it often. I loved reading this.Your rhythm is perfect. floria |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Brian this is why ecological awareness is soo important as is learning to deal effectively with other issues that plague our planet's survival.An effective write |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Brian, I don't know where in Northern Ontario you are, but I grew up traipsing through there. I have family near Espinola, Sudbury and the Sue. I remember th ebeauty of Rainbow country and your poem brings it back to me. Beautiful work. Good to meet you. Please look for a piece I will put up reflective of my memories of the Muskoka Lakes region. Your input especially would be very valuable to me. I'm adding you to my library. Bart never try to teach a pig to sing |
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HumbleBee Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 52Kentucky |
I love your poem and yes, we can soar and achieve our dreams if we only believe and have faith in God and ourselves. I was taught at a young age that I can be what ever I want to be in life, achieve any goal, if I'm willing to work hard for what I believe in. This is a great poem. |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I haven't read any of your poetry before, but I'll be on the lookout now. You had a great flow and rhyme here. Nice images too...loved this! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I soared with you on eagle's wing through clouds amid the sky We heard voices of nature sing bringing a heartfelt sigh I saw the beauty God had made to bless our lives today Weeping to see that we betrayed fills me with great dismay *sigh* you know that this poem touched the very soul of me...I love nature so much and to see what we have done to it hurts....This poem brought all the beauty of what God created for us to life for me. Thank you, so very much, Brian. **big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Brian, Beautiful passage. Tranquil soaring through the stillness of space. Very well done. Roger |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Brian, this one soars with the heart and soul of Mother Earth. Thank you for the imagery, especially this: "I soar where eagles wouldn’t dare To greet the darkest space" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I streak the sky on phantom wings To cut the clouds soft face Wonderful !!!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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