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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-11 05:50 PM

I saw you there beside the pond.
I couldn’t move, could not speak.
Why? Why for you am I so fond?
It is your shimmering eyes I seek.

Birds effortless fly all around you
saying to me you are my one dream.
Telling my mind things I must do.
Even then, my limbs do heavy seem.

Laughing, smiling, twirling around.
Such grace, such beauty my eyes see.
Given my limbs the power to bound
for I would come to let you be free.

Let me move, as my destiny is near.
Give my lungs fresh air to once call
My mind whispers a word to hear
and with it, I have then said it all.

Sparkle of shimmering waters nearby
gives to you an aura I must once feel.
Whispering pines sing a song clear.
My love, my feelings of you so real.

Listen to the thoughts I would share
for they are of a love ever so great.
Come to my arms for I will then care
for of love’s hunger we shall have ate.

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2002-01-11 05:54 PM

"Let me move, as my destiny is near.
Give my lungs fresh air to once call
My mind whispers a word to hear
and with it, I have then said it all."

stunning!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-11 05:59 PM

"Sparkle of shimmering waters nearby
gives to you an aura I must once feel.
Whispering pines sing a song clear.
My love, my feelings of you so real."

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooo breathtaking beautiful! (smiles) May your dreams and desires forever be quenched with the beauty of true love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-01-11 06:14 PM

Magnus,
Good thoughts, kind words, enjoyed

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-11 06:28 PM

You never run out of beautiful words Magnus. floria

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-11 08:16 PM

My brother has a phrase for a beautiful woman,
he says "she's a dream walkin'
this reminded me of that.
I bet you close your eyes and write these words
they are beautiful.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

HumbleBee
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since 2002-01-06

Posts 52
Kentucky

6 posted 2002-01-11 08:21 PM

I enjoyed this poem spoken from the heart. And since I will always be a Carolinian in my heart, I enjoy reading poetry from other Carolineans.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-01-11 09:19 PM

Magnus - now this is a really good poem, but I saw her there first.. hehehe....

BC

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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8 posted 2002-01-11 09:32 PM

Barry,

What a pretty poem

I like the fourth stanza the best. I enjoyed this read.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-01-11 09:46 PM

LOL@BC's reply!...Beautiful Barry....love it!
~Hugs Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

10 posted 2002-01-11 10:11 PM

Beautifully done. Aching, yet hopeful...I really like.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2002-01-11 10:17 PM

Oh my!!! such lovely words! I like, I like!
~Roniece~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-01-11 10:36 PM

BC....only in your dreams, hehehe!

thanx

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-01-12 12:10 PM

Sue..thanx much for your reply...one word
that said a lot to me...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-01-12 12:10 PM

Noah, as always, thnx...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2002-01-12 12:11 PM

Seymour..happy you enjoyed the write...thanx

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

16 posted 2002-01-12 12:16 PM

*sigh* A Friday night does not seem complete without reading one of your wonderful romantic poems...even when I am alone they give me a smile and hope for love tomorrow...Thank you, Magnus. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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