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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-01-11 05:03 PM


He gave her a rose, and it made her cry.
It made her cry, though he couldn't
understand why.
He asked her "My dear, what did I do?"
"What did I do to bring forth tears from
you?"
When she looked up to give her replies,
he could see the love there in her eyes.
She finally said, through a very soft sigh,
"It's the most beautiful thing I've ever
seen."
"That is what made me cry."
He told her "My love, I just can't agree that
it's true."
"The only beauty I see is when I look at
you."
Then a smile slowly came to her lips,
and he bent over to gently give her a kiss.
He whispered to her softly
"I love you so much, Lord only knows"
"To me you will always be more beautiful
than a rose!"

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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1 posted 2002-01-11 05:07 PM



A song with plenty of heart....

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2 posted 2002-01-11 05:08 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too cried reading this only imagining how happy she felt through her tears of joy, kissing him with happiness and beauty! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I dream of holding the rose of my heart Joanna close to mine and forever loving her! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-11 06:38 PM


Oh compare her to a rose. lovely. floria
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4 posted 2002-01-11 06:44 PM


Gentle Spirit,
A gentle poem, enjoyed.

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