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Lips Of The Eclipse
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Lips Of The Eclipse |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Lips Of The Eclipse By: Noah Eaton 4/14/01 A lonely full moon towers aloof A woman stands beneath the midnight silky skies Idyllic desires silkening yearning eyes Beryl tears humming soft wishes in the night Paying her blessings to her stepmother from above Letting herself heal in Her cotton bosom She holds true to the love in which she dreams from here on To turn her dreams into magic, and embrace her destined love Eternity’s cycles revolve around her like youthful hurricanes Waiting as the days get closer when the full moon whispers off into fantasy’s horizon To touch the heart of the man she has longfully desired and imagined Reincarnating to a new full moon of joy, true love that never fades “O’ dear stepmother, open thy windows to the one I desire!” she would say, “To you I cast the robin forth to declare my love most righteously Wings of light shalt fear not the black satin fate that leads me to my darling I sing my prayer forth to you, my mother of light, a heart as sweet as sugarcane!” This dear woman cries out to her maternal regisseur, teaching her of the purity of love Dancing in grace as her faith leads her to him, making the faithful arabesque to destiny To the day when her mother smiles in eclipse, to see the heavenly embrace with true love she had dreamed The lips of the eclipse speaking, marking the eternal joining of two hearts as one [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-11-2002 03:20 PM).] |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,so wonderul and very,very romantic!   Juanita |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ohhh yeah, Noah - This poem has many wonderful similes and poetic phrases. Well done, friend. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A beautiful work of art, dear friend, Noah. thank you.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Noah, Your words are like music. beautiful poem floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, The lips of the eclipse. One beautiful poem. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Nice love story here Noah, a touch too prosaic at times, in my opinion but done very well |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully done, Noah...even the title is romantic.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
This is very good Noah! Very creative, and imaginative! I like it a lot! Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you always write with such beautiful words. Another lovely poem... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah sweetie~Yet another truly romantic piece from your butterscotch coloured pen...(which I just happen to love) Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this,done from the woman's perspective. Lovely. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ this canvas is lovely....romantic, and soft.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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HumbleBee Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 52Kentucky |
This is so beautiful and romantic...I love the imagery...you are so talented! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Noah, you just keep getting better and better.....way to go, young man! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You always amaze me sweetie. Well-done! Keep these wondeful poems coming, you know I love to read them.  RP |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Noah; I love the way you have created and old world romanticism here in this amazing poem! For this incurable romantic, this is food for the heart! Sigh! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunningly romantic visions painted by the hand of an artist of words...BRAVO!!! Well done, Noah. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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