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the quest of camel
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the quest of camel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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whatever can I say to you? In the absence of your presence a lack of air shows blood true blue. legs in cross of of lace-up boot... I have to look away from eyes-- so much of you I see in you. of my lips constant camel searching sip-- oasis in this arid land-- oases of eyes understand... many times--I still want more... I wish for olive grove of sup-- I wish that I could wish enough. I wish for trek of caravan, silken tents to be our home starlight sprinkles in the dome just as the sky bends down to me Just as the salt adds taste to sea even as the wind kicks dust turbulent unbridled lust to drink as much as I can stand and face again the trek of sand. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I have to look away from eyes-- so much of you I see in you. even as the wind kicks dust turbulent unbridled lust to drink as much as I can stand and face again the trek of sand. Your writing always seems2touch a part of me real deep... I truly enjoyed this poem SweetSerenity and I thankU4this terrific read you've provided me2day... Muahh on cheeks *~coco~* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Serenity - There's nothing worse than that embarrassing dryness, is there? *innocent eyes* Nicely written poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Coco...thank you lovie...muah back to you. Thank you, my friend! LJ? I wouldn't know! (equally innocent eyes)  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds like the dance of the seven veils to me!! I really enjoyed this -lovely images and it really flows... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Mmmmmmmm...so very sensual, sweet friend, such a passionate quest for love's eternal joy and thirst! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you always write so wonderfully and beautifully! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Serenity ohhhh soooo nice and I love how well you rhyme. floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - just lovely, as you always do. Wanting, haunting, some of what I read. The best to you... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Constant licking of my lips constant camel searching sip-- oasis in this arid land-- oases of eyes understand... I have beheld your scent before- many times--I still want more... I wish for olive grove of sup-- I wish that I could wish enough. I wish for dances in the sand. I wish for trek of caravan, silken tents to be our home starlight sprinkles in the dome just as the sky bends down to me Just as the salt adds taste to sea even as the wind kicks dust turbulent unbridled lust to drink as much as I can stand and face again the trek of sand. ===================================================== I just went and changed my signature to match my mood....and then come find this... WE are too funny .... oh those mirrors..... and OH this poem....what a gem of pen this is.... the metaphor is played out to poetic perfection....as is the imagery... then add in your ache set to rhyme and I am sated in my craving... well my poetic one anyway.... that dont count other cravings ... poets....pizza boys..rock stars.... ROFL... kiss kiss me twin of Constant Crave.............  Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
 yowwwww!!!!! |
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