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N orth Carolina Girl
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0 posted 2002-01-11 02:06 PM


There are two old busy bodies in our town.
One is called Miss Flossie and the other Mary Brown.

The monthly dance was being held this Saturday night.
These two old ladies just knew there would be a fight.

Saturday came and everyone was ready for the dance.
They were the first ones there you could spot them at a glance.

Old Granny Hattie happened to walk in.
Miss Flossie and Mary Brown just stood there and grinned.

Whats Granny Hattie doing here they had to ask?
Maybe she`s cleaning up after this social blast.

Granny Hattie is seventy-six and spry as a hen.
What folks saw that night they may never see again.

The country band started singing their songs.
The dance floor was full before too long.

All of a sudden the dancers were clapping their hands.
For Granny Hattie and a handsome young man.

The young man stopped dancing and took a bow.
Come on Granny Hattie why don`t you show us how.

There in the middle of the dance floor was Granny.
Just a doing her thing and shaking her fanny.

Miss Flossie and Mary Brown stood in a trance.
I bet they were wishing that young man would ask them to dance.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

© Copyright 2002 Juanita - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2002-01-11 02:11 PM


Cute one Juanita..sounds like my mom..she loves to dance..and thinks shes the best haa...shes the same age..

               ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-11 02:17 PM


BRAVO!!!! I love it....I love it!!! I hope I am like granny when I reach her age. This poem is absolutely delightful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-01-11 02:25 PM


I just love your special character poems, Juanita....and of course, this one is no exception...
Now here is one wonderful grandma....
she is Chase's grandma and her name is Juanita.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Ariana
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4 posted 2002-01-11 02:27 PM


Go Granny Go!!!  Which goes to prove that you can have fun regardless of your age.  Very well done!!
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5 posted 2002-01-11 02:40 PM


Juanita darling girl this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. The flow and the rhythm are utterly utterly excellent.

I can see the picture darling girl and YOU paint these pictures so well. You really are a fabulous writer and I love you and your writing


Bravi Bravi Bravissimi


What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

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6 posted 2002-01-11 03:12 PM




YAY!!! Go Granny go, go...go Granny...go go go!!! (giggles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such beautiful fabulous verse, this is among your best! (smiles) Such grace and beauty fills your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

N orth Carolina Girl
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7 posted 2002-01-11 04:42 PM


Victoria,thanks I`m glad to hear your mama still has fun!
  


Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2002-01-11 04:46 PM


Startime,I`m so glad you enjoyed this.It was fun to write.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2002-01-11 04:49 PM


Lyra,thank you for the kind words.I wish I did look as good as that woman.But thats ok Chase loves me anyway.




Juanita

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strbbux
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10 posted 2002-01-11 06:48 PM


Oh gosh, N carolina,, the picture at the bottom really added to this wonderful humorous poem. floria
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11 posted 2002-01-11 10:13 PM


Wow!!! This is wildly wonderful. I'm for any and all Grannys, dancing. They are by far the best partners, and this old Grandpa ought to know.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

N orth Carolina Girl
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12 posted 2002-01-12 09:10 AM


Ariana,thanks for reading.I hope I have that kind of energy when I get that age.







Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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13 posted 2002-01-12 09:12 AM


Marsha,I`m so glad you liked this. I`ve tried to write more silly poems just for you.





Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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14 posted 2002-01-12 09:16 AM


Noah,thank you so much my new dear friend.

  


Juanita

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sodpossom
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15 posted 2002-01-12 11:31 AM


Very cute and humorous.I could picture grandma Hattie doing this.
N orth Carolina Girl
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16 posted 2002-01-12 02:18 PM


Floria,thank you I thought granny dancing at the bottom was cute.



Juanita

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GenXer
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17 posted 2002-01-12 02:18 PM


Juanita- Very funny.  

Do you know your poems take the longest for my browser to download because of all those graphics you add.  Where do you find this stuff?


Dave

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18 posted 2002-01-12 02:21 PM


Newel,I`m 50 and I don`t have the energy that my mother inlaw has.She is 76 and her name his Hattie.






Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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19 posted 2002-01-13 05:44 PM


Stevie,i really could picture your grandma Hattie doing this.

Love,

Mama

N orth Carolina Girl
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20 posted 2002-01-13 05:46 PM


Dave,thanks for reading! I just surf the web pages and find them.

Juanita

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