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A Tone of Voice
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0 posted 2002-01-11 11:48 AM


If I bestow the secret,
Utilizing a precise tone of voice
Shall I outline the demise?

I crave the comfort of sanctuary
your desires levitating to imported silks
and the exuberance of wild violets.
You tell me you love me,
that I am the smooth taste
of comprehension
a living soul mirroring
reflections

I love you, I declare,
in a spectacular way
tainted by
circumstance
and unframed thoughts


If I bestow the secret
Utilizing this precise
Tone of voice
Shall I outline the
Demise?

© Copyright 2002 A Tone of Voice - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-01-11 11:51 AM


Beautiful writing. I love your echo.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria
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2 posted 2002-01-11 11:58 AM


I love it ATOV.. nicely done

              ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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3 posted 2002-01-11 12:03 PM


ATOV~Very unique...I love your tone!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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4 posted 2002-01-11 12:07 PM




(smiles) Soooooo well-said, sweet friend, may true love find its way! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, may all your secrets light with joy to loves heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-11 12:07 PM


*sigh* an echoe that repeats softly from a questing heart. Well done and very tender. I love it..I hope you receive the answer your heart desires. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

mirror man
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6 posted 2002-01-11 09:11 PM


Yes, I like this too.  Very good.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-01-11 09:38 PM


Enjoyed...James
doreen peri
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8 posted 2002-01-12 01:02 AM


some of the best writing i've seen at passions in my 3 years here since this place opened....

i rise to applaud!

Kethry
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9 posted 2002-01-12 07:28 AM


ATOV,
Don't you take that tone with me! lol Seriously though this poem has tone and style.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



N orth Carolina Girl
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10 posted 2002-01-12 08:47 AM


ATOV,this was wonderful!
  

Juanita

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2002-01-12 08:57 AM


Tone of voice,
Tone of voice and body language will do it ever time. Enjoyed.

ShadowRider
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12 posted 2002-01-12 09:23 AM


While all of your work has the workings of master writing
this particular poem brought together the spice of love,
and the pitfalls of head over heels emotions.

The allure of love is sometimes the danger....so does that make you,....uh,
dangerous?  *smiles*

always a great pleasure to read the All-Terrain-Vehicle....er...A-Tone of Voice...sorry.....Huugg tSR

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