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Hurting
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Hurting |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I saw the storm clouds coming But I couldn’t stop the rain Now I’m praying that this numbing Feeling wont give way to pain But I know I can’t ignore it Like your picture in my mind So I push it down and store it Where no one will ever find And I wear such hollow faces And I tell you things are fine But inside my heart still chases Yours in hopes to make it mine But I’ll train it to forget you Like I’ve trained it times before I can never let me let you Grow inside me anymore |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this kind of hurting... You get so tired of hurting that it gives you the determination and the strength to move on to new things...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kevin: I wish you sunshine and smiles my friend - thank you for sharing - you write with passion from your heart...... Roniece PS: I forgot to add you have very beautiful eyes and a great smile (from your pic) [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (01-11-2002 06:29 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kevin, so achingly real. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well now I don't like to hear you like this!!! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Kevin Your words are full of emotions and hurt. Hang in there - it will get better and you will soon be able to swallow the lump in your throat. This type of hurt does not go away over night. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Kevin, I can feel such sadness and cries behind these words, my heart goes out to you! We are all here for you always, dearest friend, never let the painful thoughts remain in you, write them out, and you will feel better and free. Write how you feel, sweet friend, wall our hearts are with you always! (sad sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done Kevin. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
But I’ll train it to forget you Like I’ve trained it times before Beautifully expressed Kevin thank you4sharing this touching write with all of us here... *~coco~* |
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