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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-01-11 02:30 AM

This cold and deep a winters night,
I'm burrowed deep in eiderdown.
Blissful nest of winter warmth,
here I lie bemused,
while Faeries taunt my wakening,
to chase away repose.

Relentless is their mystic taunts,
upon this poets muse.
The only hope for rest this night,
my weapon now I hold.
This pen to grasp and pad in hand,
and back neath counterpane.

I surrender to their charms.
Insistant and exacting
this frigid midnight hour,
for me to write of Summers dreams,
a haiku is their wish!

"As the Faeries Waltz
Moonbeams dance upon the Sea
Magics Summer song"

Tis done!
Now please you mystic mites,
I beg you, let me rest!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (01-11-2002 06:43 AM).]

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2002-01-11 02:36 AM

Hi Ellie, thanks so much for the smile....

As the Faeries Waltz
Moonbeams dance upon the Sea
Magics Summer song"

Absolutely enchanting

Maree

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-01-11 05:25 AM

Elle,
loved the Haiku picture and the frame around it
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-11 09:28 AM

ah, yes, very misty, I love fairies!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

4 posted 2002-01-11 09:34 AM

Those pesky fairies are keeping you up at night now Mom? I'm starting to worry..

Just Kidding!!! I love this, beautiful as always.. It is an enchanting and lovely fairy tale:-)

Love ya,

Bethy

p.s. don't drown your lovely poems anymore mom.. you know what I mean :-)

Canuckster
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since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

5 posted 2002-01-11 09:35 AM

Wow! What a rich work using an evident awareness of meter in a free form and then incorporated the haiku right into the greater poem. This is a joy to read. What a tribute to an evident talent and awareness of poetry at so many levels.

Well done!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-01-11 10:31 AM

Ahh yes, the "wee ones" have charmed you, you lucky lass. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-01-11 10:34 AM

Ah, you beg for respite, but I have learned, it is not to be done, sweet Ellie...once they have you, they NEVER let go!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-01-11 10:46 AM

*giggling* well I am sure glad they got their way...this is a wonderful poem that has the hiaku as a perfect ending. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-11 11:38 AM

YAY!!! Everybody wins, I love it!!! (smiles) I can never resist the charm and beauty of fantasy, it's always so alluring and gorgeous! (sigh) You always write such pretty words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

10 posted 2002-01-11 08:33 PM

Hee HEE, Ellie,
  so you are invaded by a paranormal phenomenon--Could you say you were invaded by "POETergist??????"
   You done realllllllllll   good sis- we're all smiling!
    David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-01-11 10:05 PM

~Oh this is.....EXQUISITE!!!...Hugs, Nancy~

*~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~*

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

12 posted 2002-01-13 11:57 AM

Oh my Ellie ~ What a mystical, magical piece of whimsy ~ Such beautiful images you have brushed with your poet's pen...I simply love this little gem. Bonnie

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2002-01-13 12:15 PM

Bar none, you write the best fairy poetry

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2002-01-14 05:43 PM

OhEllie~
Sheer delight ...
and you granted their urgent pleading to perfection~

'I surrender to their charms.
Insistant and exacting
this frigid midnight hour,
for me to write of Summers dreams,
a haiku is their wish!'

"As the Faeries Waltz
Moonbeams dance upon the Sea
Magics Summer song"

Wonderfully done !
*the muses smile*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

15 posted 2002-01-14 06:39 PM

Wow this was wonderful. A poem to introduce a Haiku and all with fairies, charming. great write here Ellie. floria

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