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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-01-11 02:20 AM


Father To Sons

When you were baby's
I remember holding you
and rocking you to sleep.
I would sing you a French lullaby.
"Tell me why this life is beautiful.
Tell me why this life is gay.
Is it that, is it because, you love me?"
Although I write it now in English
I always sung to each of you in French.
That was many years ago
and now you are grown men.
Yet even though the times have changed
the feelings in my heart still remain the same.
I will always love you.
I will always be sorry
that I wasn't always there for you.
My life will always be beautiful as long
as I know that my three sons love me.

JamesLee
January05
2002



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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-11 02:31 AM


Oh and they do, they do.
beautifully written JM

Maree

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-01-11 07:35 AM


James,
Nicely written.
Keth

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3 posted 2002-01-11 09:29 AM


This is beautiful, JamesMichael. *S*
Canuckster
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4 posted 2002-01-11 09:32 AM


I grew up as one of 3 sons.  Your poem touched me in a way that few do.  I'd have given my right arm for a father who sang to me in any language.  I'd have given both for one who cared enough to tell me he cared.

Your sons are fortunate to have a father like you.  No matter how imperfect you may feel.

Thank you for this.  This poem is more powerful than you can imagine.

Victoria
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5 posted 2002-01-11 09:35 AM


Beautiful James...lovely image of you singing to your sons..hugs

               ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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6 posted 2002-01-11 10:34 AM


Very nice. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-11 10:36 AM


*sigh* I love to read of a father's love and you wrote it in such a way that you brought tears to my eyes. Thank you, so much, James, for sharing this with me. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

CocoBaci
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8 posted 2002-01-11 12:23 PM


James my dear, you went and brought out a stream of tears gosh darnit i was not prepared4this either oh well itz all sweet just the same cuz the bottom line would seem2be that your poem deeply moved me...
This song of which you sang in french is a special daddy's lullaby and I am confident with every  breath the boys grown up now don't 4get the love their daddy has4them...
Hugs2uHun MUAHHHHH on cheekz
*~coco~*

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