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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-01-11 01:37 AM


~ I Warned You Darling Poets ~
~to those who made me cry~

I warned you I was coming you’d better run and hide
For now my dearest poets you’ll see my wicked side
I’ve done with being nice and saying pretty things
For now it’s time for payback hear how my vengeance sings
I begged you to be wary I said I’d let me out
So you’d better all be careful, I’m coming without a doubt
Don’t think that I’m playing I have some news for you
I’m really very serious I’ll see this job clear through

I warned you darling poets I said don’t make me cry
For now my sweetest friends I’m gonna make you sigh
You think that I’m funning Ha you’d better think again
Oh my beloved poets you’re gonna feel some pain
I thought about this carefully, what could I really do?
And then I just decided to give this gift to you
Something really dreadful that should make you weep
Come see your words dying come and take a peep

I warned you my all my comrades didn’t I tell you?
That I didn’t want to sob that I hated feeling blue
You didn’t stop your poems each one made me cry
And now my favourite writers you’ll see each of them die
Watch the execution come and see them burn
And maybe my darling poets this lesson you will learn
That when you write a poem make it bright and gay
Or my favourite poets you’ll regret it one fine day


Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-11 01:53 AM


Mushy,
Ya' know... More good times should be had by all. I do my best to contribute sweetie! But it seems when you're bad, you are better. Isn't it past your bed time, love?

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-01-11 06:05 AM


I don't want me to die
you know I'm gonna try
to turn your heart away
from prices we must pay
Can I give you a smile
to stay death's hand a while
I'll be Sherharazade
with tales to make you glad
Mushy love one more chance
is all I ask...one chance
can I make you laugh aloud
to cease your measuring of my shroud.

Pretty Please, with Malteasers on top.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-11 09:27 AM


this is cute, Marsha
I'm sorry I'm too tired to think of a good rhyme but I love this!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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4 posted 2002-01-11 09:47 AM


I hear your pain, and your complaint
I'm really very sorry
For you a verse, should raise the mood
For me; another story
You read to elevate your mood
I write to purge my pain
Perhaps some day, when I am done,
my loss will be your gain



Enjoyed your tongue in cheek taking of us downers to task.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-01-11 09:58 AM


Marsha,
There is a place for all that's said
Take that thought and go to bed.
Nice write

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6 posted 2002-01-11 10:12 AM



Yeah, right.  No more pity parties...no more cowboy songs...

WRONG!

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-11 10:50 AM


*giggling* I can't wait to see what happens next. Look out Passions, Marsha is on the war path and those who made her cry are in for it now!!! **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-11 11:11 AM




(giggles with delight) Uh oh, take cover, tears and smiles are coming our way! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you always are sooooo exciting and fun to read from, we all love you so much! I love it, sweet friend! (giggles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-01-11 01:12 PM


Watch out everyone, Marshas on the warpath
make sure you put some happy stuff
in each and every paragraph
Don't write the stuff of gloom
or you will meet your doom

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-01-11 02:48 PM


Dear, dear Marsha - Yanno, I really want to write a poem now.


OK - Maybe it isn't so sad, but I did try.

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11 posted 2002-01-11 03:17 PM


Marsha, I will try to be a good girl, a happy girl, I really will......oh, if only my muse will do the same!!! hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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12 posted 2002-01-11 04:08 PM


Dear Marsha,
You make me glad that I only post happy happy poems.

Nan

Marsha
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13 posted 2002-01-11 07:35 PM


Larry darling boy well, you know my sleep pattern is different from everyone else around me. I'm not sure why that is, Keth tells me it's because I'm a creature of the night, but that is because I'm always awake before she's gone to bed. It's a time thing she's 11 hours ahead of me here. which makes her about 16 hours ahead of Eastern Standard Time. have I got the name right?

Anyway whatever my internal clock is out of sync, so it might be time for bed but it might not.

I agree more smiles please darling boy although you do give me plenty
Thank you muchly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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14 posted 2002-01-11 07:44 PM


Keth darling sister of my soul Ahah trying to bribe me with Malteasers? You know it will work, I would forgive murder most foul for Malteasers. Hey I'd probably forgive my ex! No Now that is going too far.

You still have penance that's 363 poems Happy Poems that you have to write. One a week should be enough if you don't make me cry too much in between, and no cheating xxxxx I know you and your tricks. Don't I just


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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15 posted 2002-01-11 07:46 PM


Kathleen darling girl YOU don't need to write a verse just a simple hi is enough to brighten my day

Thank you darling girl Take care of you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Bill Charles
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16 posted 2002-01-11 09:04 PM


Marsha, Marsha, Marsha - Now I wrote you a funny one to make you laugh, remember the squirrel?

BC

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17 posted 2002-01-12 03:32 PM


Marsha - These are some very strong words, but do you have the wherewithal to see them through.  The tea I made is now frozen solid, I now believe you were bluffing about coming to NY.lol   I will be posting my positive poem today.  It almost killed me to write it, I hope you are happy.  Well, by judging by what you wrote in this poem, I guess you will be.lol  Very amusing.

Dave

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18 posted 2002-01-13 01:57 AM


Marsha, hon... I do believe I have been complying of late.. lmao.. certainly doing my best.. lots of passion and lots and lots of hope.. someday, my prince will come!!!

I promise.. no dirges.. for now.. ::laughs::

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

dgvarner
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19 posted 2002-01-13 02:35 AM


what..you want 'funny'??  go find 'you tease me' /pip/Forum42/HTML/000148.html  ...teehee...or there was the one about my 'behind' getting bigger for spending too much time HERE!  lol  (well..i couldnt find the link about my ballooning butt!  lol  but heres a silly one..): /pip/Forum50/HTML/002305.html

ok..who made bubbles cry... ....

or hey..you want funny go find my adult poems..HA!  adult poems and me???  what a concoction!

hope you find your laughter!    

hugs, g


~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"in the darkness of my lonely room, i pray that you wont fade away too soon"  -blue rodeo  


[This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-13-2002 02:47 AM).]

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20 posted 2002-01-13 12:07 PM


Marsha...I wrote one last night that didn't
make you cry....does that count????


Marsha
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21 posted 2002-01-15 12:27 PM


Canuckster thank you kindly I’ve been warning them forever that trouble was coming they didn’t listen now it’s time to pay the piper


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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22 posted 2002-01-15 12:29 PM


Seymour a place certainly in this world for whatever you write oh fabulous writer of delight

Thank you muchly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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23 posted 2002-01-15 12:29 PM


Kari darling sister of my heart YES darling girl YOU heard me right, NO tears. Or there will be trouble


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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