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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-01-10 11:02 PM



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Something almost weathered
voices sweet memories,
secret laughter in the Dahlias.
Behind the garden walls,
bodies without faces,
spirit vapors with lit trails
hover over the innocence
of childhood days, the bloom
of first-time love.Hear the murmur
sweet and low
of Nature's heart, Nature's soul.
Producing blossoms
fully grown, lovingly extolled.
Then...hear a lover's sensual voice
whisper sweet nothings
~~~~~~laughter in the Dahlias.

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1 posted 2002-01-10 11:14 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always write the most cheerful beautiful visions of love, this had me daydreaming of rolling in the meadow in my lovers arms! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria
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2 posted 2002-01-10 11:16 PM


i have heard of Dahlias pinnatas..lovely images ivy rose..hugs enjoyed

               ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-01-10 11:25 PM


Ivy Rose - loved this, and I read it more than once and felt more of what you wrote...

BC

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-11 08:31 AM


very original Ivy!  Very delicate and sensuous!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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5 posted 2002-01-11 07:34 PM


Ivy,  a soft and touching poem...flowers can
be many things,  can't they?

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