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Tompkins Hill Road
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Tompkins Hill Road |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Tompkins Hill Road The Alder trees All leaf lost Thatch the air Their twigged touch Covered with a carpet Of magic mood moss In the late afternoon Fairies toss Their bell like laughter Across the sand dunes Into the surf They curve around the minute With sweet winter breath That finds the joy Of all seasons For a moment On this winter afternoon I find it too [This message has been edited by Martie (01-11-2002 10:53 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is magic in your words, Martie, and we have missed the sparkle... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Martie! Speak to me of fairies and magic mood moss!! I LOVE THIS!! You have made my day! YES!! Magical hugs to you sweet poetess. Love, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Martie, your writing is always incredible and never ceases to blow me away. The imagery in this is outstanding, unique, and beautiful. I loved the whole concept, but especially the lines :"Their twigged touch Covered with a carpet Of magic mood moss" Gorgeous words, Martie.  *Krista Knutson* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I do love the way you write....... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, this is very good. [This message has been edited by mirror man (01-11-2002 12:25 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Martie, you've painted such a serene and peaceful picture.... to me anyway  Hugs Dear Maree |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, And all of this joy is in your words Sweet sentiments, sweet poetess LIz |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Martie, I love all your words, but in this one I felt sorry for the serf who had all those bell like laughs tossed into him. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (01-11-2002 06:25 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I guess nature poetry has always held a special place in my heart, especially this week, which is the dead of winter in that heart and I dearly enjoyed this. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You really brought that scene to life, Martie in a very beautiful way. Excellent writing!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFaerieSister~ 'In the late afternoon Fairies toss Their bell like laughter Across the sand dunes Into the surf They curve around the minute With sweet winter breath That finds the joy Of all seasons' Seems the Fae's have been busy all over the forums~ I love this ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's a picture that's frozen in time. . . one that I can look at over and over again. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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