Brand New Day....A Sonnet and A Duet with Noah

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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2002-01-10 06:23 PM

And with the rising of the sun
for once I felt my heart had won
I felt you stir and softly sway
We welcomed warm, this bright new day

Opal haze shined from your silk eyes
Your warm sigh took me by surprise
Kissing chiffon lips where you lay
Smile, love, it’s a brand new day

Dreams blend into reality
As you softly, reach out to me
Blushing to your velvet caress
To your gentle touch I confess

As the sun rises we will dance,
in this, our 'dream come true' romance

~Noah & SEA~

Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-10 06:32 PM

What a beautiful duet...*sigh* dreamy and filled with tender love. Well done, you two. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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2 posted 2002-01-10 06:41 PM

Soooooo nicely done you two. great work Sea and Noah, floria

rosepetals25

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3 posted 2002-01-10 06:46 PM

Sea and Noah,

This is just beautiful

You too work so well together.

Hugs to you both,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-10 07:48 PM

Sue and Noah! Very very well done and oh so sensual! I love it!! You two sing well together and I love the sexy pic.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

SEA

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with you

5 posted 2002-01-10 08:10 PM

Startime~ you are very sweet, thank you!

Strbbux~ thank you, Noah is so great to do a duet with!

Tara~ thank you, it’s because Noah is so nice

Nancy~ this was a lot of fun, thank you!

~SEA

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6 posted 2002-01-10 09:56 PM

OH wow you two did an awsome job! Great job to both of you! It flowed so well, I have no clue who wrote what. Wonderful

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

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7 posted 2002-01-10 11:25 PM

A wonderful collaberation!

...and that pic of the two of you....WOW!!!

Victoria

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8 posted 2002-01-10 11:27 PM

Lovely ...nicely done noah and sea..blended well..

~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

GenXer
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9 posted 2002-01-10 11:40 PM

Susan/Noah - Really enjoyed this passion filled write. The last line was definitely my favorite. Well done.

Dave

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-01-10 11:43 PM

SEA & Noah - now look you two, this is just not good, it's excellent. Youse work well together...

BC

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2002-01-11 09:36 AM

Oh God, that pic by Steve Hanks and that poem!!!!
oh you guys did a fine job.

wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Canuckster
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12 posted 2002-01-11 09:42 AM

I like this. The quatrameter is effective. The meter feels a little sporadic for a stated sonnet, but as the subject is passionate love, it seems to work and reinforce the emotional quality rather than the alternative which might be more consistent metrically, but would probably lose that quality.

Critique aside I enjoyed the read and caught the passion, which means it worked.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-01-11 09:51 AM

Sea & Noah,
I don't know how you did it , but you did.
A lovely write, enjoyed.

True Reflections
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14 posted 2002-01-11 09:55 AM

Noah and the Sea just seem to be a match made in heaven.

I'm heavy on the covet after reading this, so hopefully the Lord will forgive my transgression. Beautiful collaboration.

Roger

Duncan
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15 posted 2002-01-12 12:13 PM

Ya'll make this seem so easy! I've been trying to write a sonnet and it just isn't happening. Great poem!

Kethry
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16 posted 2002-01-12 07:51 AM

Noah you were made to be close to (the) SEA, there is nothing wooden in this write, you two are quite the matched pair.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

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17 posted 2002-01-12 03:24 PM

Thank you so much for all your beautiful comments, sweet friends, we had so much fun writing this together! (big hugggssssss) We love you all so so much!!!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Listening to every heart

18 posted 2002-01-12 03:32 PM

A beautiful duet...

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