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Open Poetry #18

Out of my hands

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2002-01-10 02:57 PM

If its real
Than you feel
Like you didn’t plan it
All you know
Is you’ll grow
When you understand it
But its hard
To discard
Self controlling notions
So you wait
On your fate
And cut off emotions
Some may claim
That the same
Offer no distraction
But routine
As a scene
Is my one attraction

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-10 03:03 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo well-said, sweet friend, if we all reach out to one another on a daily routine, we can all understand so much more and share our love from our hands to the world, and sometime swhen our emotions run wild, it is better to experience then let your heart sing out. (big hugggssss) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to read! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-10-2002 03:03 PM).]

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-01-10 07:34 PM

Sometimes fate has a way of taking control of us..it's good to let go and not worry. Enjoyed your poem.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2002-01-10 10:01 PM

This is one to be read aloud, Kevin, I loved the rhythm of this.  I especially liked the lines "So you wait
                    On your fate
                    And cut off emotions" Exellent writing, I enjoyed it!

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

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