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Once upon a yesterday...
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Once upon a yesterday... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
The time has come after all is said and done to let go of our past yet, how can it be this ache inside me is bittersweet in taste... As distance in between the beat of two hearts that vowed a sacred pledge now find the struggle of letting go an overwhelm of turmoil... I know now more than ever things will never be the same as my heart is thawing slowly from the numbness of the pain all the while believing in the good of you regardless of the ache I feel... I must have loved you once upon a time to feel this way today... In twilight sleep of clustered dreams whispered prayers to heaven I shall send for strength of spirit to guide me toward new beginnings of tomorrow wherein lies no conflict of you within this world... Embrace this verse as a meant to be release me from your controlling wing allow the butterfly in me to soar beyond the remembering... Just this once I ask of you show me that you truly do love me in your own way and unshackle me from the memory of once upon a yesterday... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (01-10-2002 02:49 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I must have loved you once upon a time to feel this way today... Riding the same wavelength today, Coco. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dearest Coco ... what a wonderful, sad, compelling piece. I love it and hate the pain I know you feel, but ifyou can write this wonderful piece I know you are OK and will get even better my poetfriend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, I too pray with all my heart that he will love you as your heart desires and make you feel special and loved like before, free of the tears of yesterday! (big hugggsssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Coco, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetPoetFriends Duncan, Interloper and Mistletoe thank you bearyyyyyyy much  my heart sends you hugz...*~coco~* |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It's always a yesterday isn't it? Well done CocoBaci. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* love needs to be free to soar the heavens and grow the way it is meant to be. I am sorry this was about yesterday and not the feelings of love flowing in your heart today...but you let go with such tenderness that I know the love leaves a strong impression still upon your heart. ***big hugs*** My heart goes out to you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CocoBaci - I relate to this writing very well. Love your title 'Once upon a yesterday'. Just beautiful writing, I can't say enough about this.... BC |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Romeo oh Romeo you're a sweetheart2say what you said in reply and I thank you4commenting Poetfriend...Startime, sweetie ya know there's something in your reply2me that just hugged my heart so it seemed 4an instant there and I thank you dearone4this2day... Bill, muahhhhh on cheekz sweetie and I thank you4your kindness and sincerity... PoetFriends *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed very much |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Once upon a yesterday...Why is it so hard to move on from that thought? This is beautiful and sad, and I understand the feeling. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ 'I must have loved you once upon a time to feel this way today...' Ohhhhhhhhh .... poignantly perfect~ *BIG* Hugs ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is very good. And familiar to me too much. "I must have loved you once" is the most familiar, I think. Probably to also too many others. A very good write all around, well said. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
VandanaSweetie, you are always there my dearPoetfriend and4this I thank you always4your smiles mean bearyyyyyy much2me... Cat, gosh i luv that nickname4u and I'd just like2say2u as well my heart sends out2u a teddy bear hugNmuahhh on cheekz2u2 DearPoetFriend... MargeSweetMarge, your gift of friendship all this time that you have shared with me has brought much light in2 my world and4this I deeply thank u.... MirrorMan (may I call u...MM), thank you PoetFriend for what I just read from you in reply has made my smile a brighter one... PoetFriends *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We each have our own personal way of letting go of love and moving on...and yet we all feel the same exact feelings of sadness and grief and disappointment as we go through the process...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JamesSweetie, very true what you say2me in reply though I must say the following 2expand on what you've so kindly said2me here... Indeed we all love and show our love in our own ways thaz a part of the thrill that we're blessed with in our living days that makes it all the more exhilarating I guess... However when another thinx they can have the best of both worlds and still expect the other2 not sway their love 4them, well as certain as the amber sun does rise at every dawn with that kinda thinking may come conflict and eventually heartache so it seems... I'm probably rambling on here but you've nailed the point that I've tried2pen in this poem 2the 'T' my friend and it's odd but when one does put closure to something it usually takes the other offguard so then I ask myself how can that be when all the signsNwriting were there clearly written on the wall and their choices made are the actions that say what it is they really want (or is it) teehee... You're da best JamesNhugs2uAlways... *~coco~* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always wondered my PoetFriend, why we have to let go today to remember tomorrow. . . you always make me think. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh boy, this touches in a deep place.... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetSven, my heart hugz u dear friend muahhhh on cheekz and thank you sooooo bearry much4letting me know you dropped in here... IrishRose, you're a sweetie and I thank you as well for letting me know your thoughtsNfeelings cuz 2be truthful I'm the one who is deeply touched by the kindness of a friend like you Smiles2u2PoetFriends *~coco~* |
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