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Closet Of Dreams
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Closet Of Dreams |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“CLOSET OF DREAMS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Doors I open in the hallway, searching inside each to find… Not knowing what I’d see, possibly a nightmare, in my mind… Never did you want to know, tomorrow was my dream… All the years which are gone, tragic to me, it would seem… A dream to die, a dream to kill, never understood what you did… Slowly suppressing these passions, deeply I buried, and they hid… So I look into each door, you’ll never know the cost… Perhaps in the closet of dreams, I’ll find again, what I’ve lost… ~~~~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great poem, Bill. Whatever you've lost, there will be a replacement. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* well I hope you find it, Bill...I could feel such loneliness here and it brought tears to my eyes...I know this closet you speak of ...it is where I keep all my dreams...somehow I don't think they will become reality..but I do so like to dream them. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Bill, this tugs at my heart ya know that Poetfriend... Hugs2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy firstly this is an absolutely fabulous piece of writing, one of your many layered ones. Secondly the closet is full of dreams darling boy just have a rummage around and you never know what delight will be revealed. Utterly utterly wonderful writing, I'm loving the discovery of YOU, keep them coming darling boy. There's never ENOUGH beauty in the world, and you add to it daily.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is so very sad, I too use the closet as a metaphor much to my memories of the past, and even in the present, and I want the love of my life so badly, I feel sad just thinking if I can never have her and she will always be lost in the closet of my heart. (sad sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know deep down with all my heart you will find the greatest happiness always and you'll find all your heart desires, for you deserve the greatest happiness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Bill...very thought provoking write and one that I truly enjoyed pondering today. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy just giving this a friendly bump it would be a crying shame for it to disappear too quickly It is one of your deep and special poems Wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sometimes, we lose something so important to us...the loss of a true love and we always search for it. Bill, this is truly a special poem and it really hit home with me. ***Ivy Rose |
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