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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-10 11:19 AM


(This is for the love of my life...Joanna "RosePetal")

Quattrocento
By: Noah Eaton
1/10/02

I’m welcomed to your City of Flowers
I’m walking down your alabaster bird-hatching streets
I’m polishing the bronze doors to my dreams cathedral
Opening them before you, my sweet darling

Come, my love, I’ll take you into Ghiberti’s workshop
Together we’ll re-establish the grace of Donatello
We’ll etch our loves fantasies into statue form
Decorate our hearts with the beauty of loves art and soul

Ever since you have revealed your love to me
Timeless visions have been coming back easily
You’ve brought the Renaissance to my heart
In loves arms, we’ll relive Quattrocento

You’ve renovated all my empty walls into frescoes
You have given my dreams perspective
My skies are now our fantasies Sistine ceiling
Myriads of lovers dreams come true filling each horizon

Lay me down in your garden of roses under your mulberry trees
I’ll kiss your luscious moist cranberry lips
We’ll strum eternities in G-minor
Basking in the heavens afterglow we’ll cherish

Ever since you have revealed your love to me
Timeless visions have been coming back easily
You’ve brought the Renaissance to my heart
In loves arms, we’ll relive Quattrocento

Like Van Eyck, you have braided rainbows in my skies
Like Mona Lisa, you always make me sigh
Hold me, my love, hold me forever
I’ll make you happy every day and night
Your love is so divine…

Ever since you have revealed your love to me
Timeless visions have been coming back easily
You’ve brought the Renaissance to my heart
In loves arms, we’ll relive Quattrocento
Forever and ever and ever…
I will always love you…


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-10-2002 11:21 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-10 11:31 AM




Noah, you make me believe in goodness, thank you for all you've done here.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2002-01-10 11:33 AM


you are a lucky man. This read was breath taking, may happiness and success bless your relationship. ill be looking 4 more of your stuff
Victoria
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3 posted 2002-01-10 01:47 PM


i just love to read your poems Noah..you really have a way of bringing your thoughts to life..always a treat to read them...hugs

              ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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4 posted 2002-01-10 02:06 PM


CONGRATULATIONS NOAH!!
Wonderful 4000th Post!!
I am sure your Joanna will love this as well.
We are so lucky to have you here with us!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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5 posted 2002-01-10 02:09 PM


Noah, you have a very vivid and descriptive style that no doubt mirrors your own very evident kindness and exuberance in life.  Thanks for sharing this fine poem.
Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-10 04:08 PM


BRAVO!!! CONGRADULATIONS ON YOUR 4000TH....and a more perfect poem for it you could not have written...let the visions flow, Noah and keep sharing them with us.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

angelbear
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7 posted 2002-01-10 04:44 PM


Can't wait to see your 5000th post....that was so wonderful and heart warming. I have to read it again now!!!

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-01-10 04:49 PM


Happy 4000

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

walker
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9 posted 2002-01-10 04:59 PM


WOW,CONGRATS TO A GREAT POET.
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10 posted 2002-01-10 05:04 PM



Congratulations on 4 , Noah.  
Your kind remarks take time, I know,
and we can see that you read each
and every poem you lay your eyes on....

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11 posted 2002-01-10 05:17 PM


Noah,

      Congrats my friend And thank you for the 4000 posts of love and tenderness. I can't wait to see more

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

catalinamoon
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12 posted 2002-01-10 05:20 PM


Stunning, Noah. Even more than usual. Congratulations on your 4000 posts, and your beautiful love.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-01-10 05:23 PM


This is very romantic Noah, Joanna is very lucky and has a beautiful name I'm sure she will love this.

Congrats on 4000!

Maree

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14 posted 2002-01-10 06:40 PM


Yes, this is very good.  Enjoyed it very much.  And congratulations on your quattromila.
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15 posted 2002-01-10 06:44 PM




Music to the ears Noah..CONGRATULATIONS..
beautiful poem. and hey Quattrocento, you are speaking my language..floria

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16 posted 2002-01-10 06:54 PM


Congratulations Noah!!!!  

Such a sweet poem....may everything be what you want it to be

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17 posted 2002-01-10 07:15 PM


Hi baby!!! Congrats on your 4000th!!
You are the best guy that I could ever ask for. I always wanted a guy who could express his feelings to me through poetry and now that I have it I am so grateful. You are very talented, someday I hope to be able to write as good as you.

Thank you for your sweet compliment Dark Angel!

With Love,
Joanna

Ethan Halo
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18 posted 2002-01-10 07:39 PM


a vivid and brilliant portrait! the imagery and the references are so fantastic...
*envy*
that's what i have for people who have love like this. you're lucky in many ways.
and you expresses it with such talent!!
this one is a treat for all the senses... well done!

*simplify*

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19 posted 2002-01-10 09:31 PM


CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  On your 4000th post.  That is awsome!  Great poem!  It's very nice.  


Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

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20 posted 2002-01-10 09:50 PM


Noah,
Congratulations! Now what was that you were saying about "g" strings?

Marsha
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21 posted 2002-01-10 10:33 PM


Noah darling boy this, as all of yours are, is utterly utterly sensational

The descriptive and beautiful flow of words were awesome

Absolutely Fantastic
4 0 0 0
W E L L  D O N E   N O A H


here to the next 4000

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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22 posted 2002-01-10 10:36 PM


Noah...This is just EXQUISITE!!!! Your love flows from your pen and reveals the beauty of your heart and soul.  **Ivy Rose
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23 posted 2002-01-10 10:46 PM


Noah - congratulations on the number 4000. Now I can't even count that high. But I certainly hope Joanna sees this, how could she resist once she does is beyond me my friend...

BC

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24 posted 2002-01-12 12:36 PM


Congratulations on 4,000, Noah! Beautiful poem!
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25 posted 2002-01-12 01:59 PM


Ah, Noah; I never tire of reading your beautiful peotry to your love. Always filled with a tenderness beyond compare, how blessed she is! My love is such a one, and I am ever blessed as you are! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

JamesMichael
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26 posted 2002-01-12 02:21 PM


Noah this is full of romantic flavor...James
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