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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2002-01-10 04:13 AM



My golden tresses of silk upon satin pillows do lay
Dreams adrift with longings so caught up in sweet sleep
Captivating Knight lyrics not forgotten by day;
Lovesongs tempting my desires so deep.

Gentle breezes blow through my window so fair;
Oh...
Is it thee my good Knight in my arms that I hold?
Tenderly kissing my lips; strong fingers now running through my hair
Fires warming my heart where I’d once been so cold.

Passions, long kept captive in my secret place
Dancing flames; fires burns ; passion ignites
Oh how I long to gaze full upon your handsome face.
Come hither now, love... closer,this enchanting night

Oh be still heart!
Take flight with gossamer wings of my loves delight;
I call out your name, love.... and bid you to come;
Enraptured of love and your whelm O Good Knight
We two, intertwined passionately become now as one.

Amidst moonlit persuasions and whispers of bliss,
Fulfilling of dreams and promises, now kept
The look of your eyes into mine...as our lips locked to kiss
Or was it just a dance in the roses with you as I slept?

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2002-01-10 06:58 AM


Very well written, Koko - The romance of it is pure female, which is something every man should note.
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2 posted 2002-01-10 08:28 AM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I hope that the knight of your dreams has swept you off your feet and has given you pure, chivalrous love! (kiss on cheek) May you always be the Guinevere of his heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! I LOVE IT!!! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-10 09:45 AM


Oh, KoKo, it is so wonderful to see you here again.  How are  you?

This poem is ethereal and lovely in every way.  Hope you are doing well.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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4 posted 2002-01-10 11:00 AM


Soooooooo good to see you posting again KoKo....missed your wonderful poetry.
And I'm glad that I was able to read this gem from you.


(((hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-01-10 11:05 AM


Koko,
Enjoyed the dream and the write.

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6 posted 2002-01-10 12:20 PM


enjoyed
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-01-10 12:37 PM


KokoStewartKoomoa - this is excellent. Loved what you have written, and I love the bed of roses, my favorite flower....

BC

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-01-11 02:40 AM


Koko this is one of my favorites...I wondered a few times..."Where is Koko?"  Glad to see you on these pages again...James
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