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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-01-10 01:15 AM



does not weight much
lightness of the touch
ethereal moonbeams
starlit gleams
comet vapour trails
delights of nightingales

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1 posted 2002-01-10 07:55 AM


Very enchanting!
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2 posted 2002-01-10 12:55 PM


lightness of the touch
ethereal moonbeams
starlit gleams
comet vapour trails
delights of nightingales

Yes, they do not weigh much indeed. These things that give us light, that bring joy into our lives, and fill our hearts with glowing warmth... They don't weight much, do they? But they're more significant than their weight...

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ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-01-10 05:41 PM


yes Mon Cherie, their significance far outweighs their weight!


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4 posted 2002-01-10 08:22 PM


Short and sweet...a lot said with few words.
Very good, Martin.

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5 posted 2002-01-10 09:34 PM


Sometimes the best things aren't of mass, but of beauty and love.  Nicely said!

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6 posted 2002-01-10 09:43 PM


Oooh!!  How much do I love this one!?
Beautiful!!  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

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7 posted 2002-01-10 10:13 PM


that there are those who can enjoy what gifts we have that have zero mass is very rewarding.


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