to sleep with your love, again only to wake without it, still would drive me mad ============================================= (I call it "mad crazy") Oh Poet Duncan....impact be thy name.................
I ask why you come here, you say just because Could I live without it if I knew what it was But it really dont matter when you look at me that way.
Duncan - You may hear that because somebody else denies the truth. What better way to illustrate a total lack of character than to say, "Sure, I said I love you, but I lied and used you instead."? The poem is well written.
*sigh* I know the feeling....we must convince ourselves that there was never love on their part and then the pain is not so great for otherwise the confusion and not understanding can drive us crazy. **big hugs** My heart goes out to you, Duncan.
Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
Duncan, it's an absolute treat2come across this read this morning... Your poem touches my heart in more ways than one may think... Your writing is superb PoetFriend and thank you4sharing of yourself with us here...
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Duncan, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to your lost love and pray with all my heart you have found true new love to replace the pain and erase the lies of those love letters! (sad sigh) Our hearts go out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!
May love and light always shine upon you!
Love, Noah Eaton
South Carolina, USA
Duncan, sorry you are feeling enough pain to write this. You know, I can't decide what hurts more, to think they never loved you, or that they did, and somehow you or they ruined it. All of it hurts.. You wrote this well. Sandra