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A Bird Came By
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A Bird Came By |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“A BIRD CAME BY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When I opened my eyes this morning, the sun was shining, in the window… A bird stopped by, started to sing, softly taking my heart, to borrow… Sang of my thoughts, how did it know, what was on my mind, that day… But there was this bird, just singing, I listened closely, before it flew away… My heart was taken, when it left, like you did, when you departed… But now another came to sing, softly for me, the brokenhearted… ~~~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, I'm buying a new birdfeeder tomorrow. I miss those birds! Enjoyed this one, Bill. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Bill, Love those birds. I live in a condo in Florida and a little bird sings to me loudly every morning. Waking up just wouldn't be the same without him (or her)  Thanks for the thought. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another beautiful write BC...hope your view is inspiring you still.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill~Wonderful write as always my friend! Hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy as always your writing has incredible flow and is sooooooooo amazingy good I love the feel of this one, it has hope Wonderful writing utterly uterrly fabulous writing, YOU are a poet of superior quality   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love birds, and every time I spot a hummingbird or robin or sparrow or any bird on my bird feeder, I always giggle in delight and am so happy by the majestic sight God gives us all! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
could write a poem about the brokenhearted but...it wouldn't make it mend...*w nice one M |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,I loved this!We have 5 bird feeders in our yard and I do enjoy watching them and hearing them sing.I also love the way hearing the bird sing seem to help find love again.   Juanita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My heart was taken, when it left, like you did, when you departed… But now another came to sing, softly for me, the brokenhearted… I like this very much, Bill... sometimes, it just takes a long time before we can hear another song as anything but noise. *S* Well written! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I hope you will hear the sweet song of a love bird soon and that it's music will heal the pain of the past. So sad...My heart goes out to you. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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