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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-01-09 09:55 PM


This is for my younger son, Victor.  He graduated from Columbia University Law School in May, 2000.  He now works for a big law firm in NYC.

My son, today I am so proud
to see you graduate
I must admit, the years of toil
were more than worth the wait

today, as you join the legal profession
I have only one very sad confession
your loving Dad isn't here to share
this moment, for which he watched you prepare

but I know he's here with us today
in his own unique and special way
proud and happy as can be
after all these years, to finally see

that tyke who once sat on his knee
receive his coveted law degree
an adorable imp with big bright eyes
you could have won the mischief prize

nothing ever escaped your hands
be it pictures, light switches or pots and pans
and you still have that sense of fun
even with that law degree, hard won

wearing a cap and a gown and a hood
as a Doctor of Law, you look so good
knowing how hard you worked for this
I plant on your cheek, a mother's proud kiss

in my mind, I hear the roll of a drum
as my heart fills with pride
at the man you've become



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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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1 posted 2002-01-09 09:57 PM



Congratulations.  He picked a difficult profession.  I know.  I wish him well.  You have every right to be very proud of him!

GenXer
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2 posted 2002-01-09 10:50 PM


Lyra - The graduation would have been better though if George W. Bush showed up, and not Al Gore.lol   Hope your son is still doing well in the big city.  That is silly of me, he has NY pizza on every street corner to keep him happy.lol

Dave

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3 posted 2002-01-09 11:01 PM


I feel such proudness in your words.  I feel such happiness, and some sadness.  But most of all I hear sincerity and care.  The care of a loving Mother.  Great job.  Roger


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4 posted 2002-01-10 09:57 AM


Lyra,
Does this mean we can't tell Lawyer jokes? I hope he doesn't prosecute for 'poor poetry posting' or I'm in for a life sentence. Congrats and I'm sure he's just as proud of you as you are of him. BTW - Excellent poem.

Roger

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5 posted 2002-01-10 10:08 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, I cried throughout this whole poem, only envisioning seeing him gain his diploma and watching your smile on your face as you cried! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart cries in sadness that his dad couldn't be there for him, but I know deep down with all my heart he would definitely be there if he could and will always love him so much, as well as cried in happiness for growing and following his dreams! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is the most beautiful poem he could ever dream of! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-10 10:18 AM


Oh Madame, I am at a loss for words. The joy of seeing ones child grow up and become something wonderful..What a pleasure that is to parents..lovely. floria
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7 posted 2002-01-10 10:39 AM


Lyra,anyone can see you how proud you are of your son.Wonderful poem!
TAKE CARE!






Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-01-10 10:01 PM


Thanks so much for your congratulations, Karilea...Needless to say, I am very proud of him.

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Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-01-10 10:05 PM


Roger (poetic plumber)  Thank you for your reply.  There was a lot of happiness that day...but also much sadness.  Victor's dad, my first husband...had died just about a year earlier.  I know how much he would have loved to have been there....but I think he might have been there anyway.

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Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-01-10 10:10 PM


Thanks Roger (True Reflections)
Don't worry, Victor is a friendly lawyer...and he deals mostly with real estate, not poetry...and besides, I know he would love your poems, as much as I do.

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Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-01-10 10:15 PM


Thanks so much, Noah...It was a sadly bittersweet day for all of us.  We all missed Victor's dad...Please see my comments to Poetic Plumber(above)

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Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-01-10 10:18 PM


Thanks so much, Floria...I know that as a mother, you know exactly how proud I am of him.

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-01-10 10:32 PM


Thanks much, Dave...but Victor likes Michigan pizza much better.                   But you are right about the dubbleya.  It might have been more fun if Bush was there instead of Gore.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks


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Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-01-10 10:39 PM


Thanks so much, Juanita...and I know that you are very proud of Stevie also.


copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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15 posted 2002-03-08 11:17 AM


Lyra,

i read and i enjoyed..we do the things we do so that our parents would be proud of us..

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