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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2002-01-09 07:26 PM

For You

I give you my strength
I offer you my comfort
When you’ll need it most
My heart and arms opened wide
To catch the falling teardrops

I give you my love
I offer to you my heart
Know it’s always here
With undying loyalty
With unconditional love

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-09-2002 07:29 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-09 07:27 PM

Beautiful Tara!!
Thank you for the lovely words this evening.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-09 07:33 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, unconditional love pours out from your golden heart and to the heart of the love of your life! (kiss on cheek) We all wish you and Dave the greatest of happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-09 07:44 PM

*sigh* you offer love with every piece of your heart. Magnificent. I love it. **big hugs**

I think I know someone else who will too.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-01-09 07:52 PM

Truly a piece from your heart, filled with love and devotion ... much enjoyed Tara!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rogue24
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since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-01-09 07:58 PM

Beautiful write sweetie, as always from a beautiful person HUGS Love you.
Ter

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-01-09 08:16 PM

Tara darling girl, this is utterly wonderful

It speaks your name with every word, and YOUR name is love.

Truly fabulous writing as always your heart is speaking here. YOU write soooooooo well

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

rosepetals25

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7 posted 2002-01-09 08:56 PM

Nancy - Thank you. It was nice of you to stop in.

Noah - Your so kind.. thank you friend.

Karen - I'm glad you liked

Thank you.

Kit - Thank you

I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Ter - Love you too.

Marsha -

What a wonderful response. Thank you for you heartwarming words. They are greatly appreciated.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-01-09 08:57 PM

Because I know you so well, I know this is meant in the most sincere way.

You've got a one one, Dave.

(((hugs))) Tara

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2002-01-09 09:38 PM

Lovely, heartfelt tankas!

woo hoo for Tara and Dave

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-01-09 10:11 PM

Tara~

Unconditional what a perfect way to say love...

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

11 posted 2002-01-09 10:17 PM

Tara - Definitely what love should be. Well done.

Dave

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

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South Florida

12 posted 2002-01-09 11:38 PM

you are the perfect lady that every guy dreams of tara! (hugs)

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

13 posted 2002-01-10 12:21 PM

well THIS guy does at least.
anybody else that dreams of her has to go through me first, and that *ahem* ain't gonna happen.
sorry to disappoint :P
tara, my dear, as usual you amaze me. your poems are a shining light to keep my feet on the path, and i love every word.
but mostly i love you.
believe it or not, eventually i will get enough spare time without relatives in my house to get some writing done, and then i will reply in poetic form, as you deserve.
-Dave (the great and terrible)

rosepetals25

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14 posted 2002-01-10 01:52 AM

Auguste - Thank you for coming in

Melissa - Chickie I have MISSED you.. good to see you here *hugs*

And thank you.

Lauren - Thank you for visiting.. I'm happy you liked it.

Dave - Thank you very much

Joanna - *chuckles* Well I don't about THAT for crying out loud LOL.. but thank you all the same

Dave - *sighs* You are so... amazing. Thank you for your inspiration.. for your love.. for you.

Love you more than you know baby.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-10-2002 01:53 AM).]

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