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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-09 04:46 PM


I'll begin with a brand new canvas
And paint a picture of love for you
So sit back and make yourself comfortable
I want you to have the very best view

I'll start with the color of sapphires
Which I'll use to paint the sky
And across the calm clear water
I'll paint some seabirds flying by

The warm wind blows gently around us
As we walk together along the shore
Just as long as I have your love
Nothing else really matters anymore

The color of the sky will soon change
As the golden sun sinks below the sea
We'll stand together by the water
As you so very passionately kiss me

Two lovers now lay in the moonlight
These two souls will soon join as one
Immersed in love's picture forever
As our portrayal of love is now done


Suetang

[This message has been edited by Suetang (01-09-2002 08:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-09 05:17 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you finger-paint with such romance and love in your words so lovingly, may the beauty of love forever shine in your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true masterpiece of love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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2 posted 2002-01-09 06:53 PM


Oh Suetang, from one who paints, you have done a wonderful job painting your picture with this poem. floria
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-01-09 07:00 PM


Suetang,
A very pleasant read, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-01-09 07:19 PM


Sue, a very enjoyable read....just lovely!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-09 07:22 PM


BRAVO!!!!STUNNING!!! I love the picture you painted. It is absolutely perfect. BRAVO!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2002-01-09 09:04 PM


Seems like the perfect portrait of love. May it be always be true in your life.
Sandra

Honeybee
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7 posted 2002-01-09 09:36 PM



I really love this!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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8 posted 2002-01-10 10:55 PM


You painted one beautiful picture of love through your poetry Sue, very lovely.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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