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0 posted 2002-01-09 03:38 PM


"Beauty Heaven Holds For Me"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved
V1:
I could watch you forever,
Standing under the street-light.
Is there anything better,
Then to watch an angel smile.

V2:
But I've offen wondered if,
You're way to good to be true.
'Cause I've never felt like this,
I think I'm in love with you.

B:
And I don't hope that I'm,
To far outta line...when I say that.

C:
In your eyes I see the beauty heaven holds for me.
In your voice I hear the music of eternity.
In your touch I feel a little incecureity.
But in my heart I know that you're the one for me...

V3:
Now did you fall from heaven?
what's so special 'bout the moon?
When can I see you again?
Really hope it's sometime soon!

B:
And I don't hope that I'm,
To far outta line...when I say that.

C:
In your eyes I see the beauty heaven holds for me.
In your voice I hear the music of eternity.
In your touch I feel a little incecureity.
But in my heart I know that you're the one for me...
(2x)

Refrain:
I could watch you forever,
Standing under the street light...

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-09 03:43 PM




BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I'm sure when you sing this to your sweetheart, she will swoon for sure! (big hugggsssss) This would make a great hit single, I heard the melody in my head just reading it! We all love you so much, sweet friend, beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

heather_kitn
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since 2001-12-07
Posts 61
In The Kokapelli's Song
2 posted 2002-01-09 03:45 PM


I really love this...well penned.

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
           ~Picasso~

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