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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-01-09 01:41 PM



We gained serenity from our vows to love
and drew together in celebration
young in spirit and heart we began
our lives of collaboration

Will our love survive to that golden time
will your hand still reach out to find me
will we still note each glance, each touch
that guides us to our eternity

Or will we blink and loose the sight
of what was planned as love’s design
will we turn and walk away
from the world that is yours and mine

Perhaps the future is best unknown
each moment seen as a cherished token
that combined with our love will ever be
a bond that remains unbroken.

When does a memory become an heirloom
to be passed down from heart to soul
when all the beautiful tomorrows
become the yesterdays that make us whole



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1 posted 2002-01-09 02:41 PM


i like the strong ending and the sentiment o yuh
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2 posted 2002-01-09 03:32 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) I too feel that the most happiest way to cherish love is to cherish each and every day and not wait for tomorrow but rather let tomorrow become yesterday, of eternal days filled with loves happiness! (kiss on cheek) I love it so much, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-09 04:22 PM


When does a memory become an heirloom
to be passed down from heart to soul
when all the beautiful tomorrows
become the yesterdays that make us whole
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This piece touches me, in a place deep inside that still believes long lasting 'forever' loves truly exists.  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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4 posted 2002-01-09 04:46 PM


~Will our love survive to that golden time
will your hand still reach out to find me
will we still note each glance, each touch
that guides us to our eternity

Or will we blink and loose the sight
of what was planned as love’s design
will we turn and walk away
from the world that is yours and mine~

so true....it could be written for me.
Thank you for reposting this beautiful poem.

((hugs))
Charisma

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2002-01-09 05:49 PM


Thank you for you kind comments!! This is one of my personal favorites.
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6 posted 2002-01-10 11:04 AM


This is one of my favorites... and with the library of incredible poetry you've penned, that's saying a lot. *S* Thank you for reposting this beauty!
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7 posted 2002-01-10 11:12 AM


Poet deVine,
Good question and a wonderful write. *L*

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8 posted 2002-01-10 05:26 PM


liked it
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