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. . . melting into you . . . senryu
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. . . melting into you . . . senryu |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (01-10-2002 09:54 AM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Beautiful, indeed... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
mmmm lovely..you melted me! I love senryu's and tanka's so much  RP |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Oh yes ! Lovely inspired piece ... and lovely was the inspiration of our StarTime~ Thank you for sharing that 'heart'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
come, melt into me these open arms await you let's shut out the world ~*~ softly embracing lost to the sighs of this night melting into one ~*~ touches of tender to warm our hearts to melting together, we flow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words melt all our hearts, this is soooooo beautiful! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Breathtaking....love it. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Once again, love as it should be. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* beautiful indeed.....and love Sea's reply too. Charisma |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
Ah, beautiful love. Very nice, Interloper |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper....once again.....perfection in so few words...... ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Interloper, the title drew me in, the senryu is beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Gorgeous senryu~~~~ Love the way your words melt into the soul. ****Ivy Rose |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh wonderful. Melting into you. wonderful. floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* with a title like that I could not resist and to see that I inspired such a romantic poem just left me sighing over and over. Absolutely beautiful. I could feel the hug turn to a kiss and I melted into it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
very nice. the active nature of the verbs make this a strong poem |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
That's what love is. Great senryu. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh my! This is one gorgeous senryu! Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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