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N orth Carolina Girl
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0 posted 2002-01-09 01:05 PM


The snow was falling pretty that Thursday night.
On Friday morning it was such a beautiful sight.

The part of North Carolina that I live in.
We only get snow every now and then.

We got about 4 inches this time around.
My grandson Chase went outside and jumped up and down.

He wanted to build a snowman is all he could say.
"Come on grandma lets go out and play"

Chase,my son Stevie and me went out to build a snowman.
The snow didn`t want to stick not even to the gloves on our hands.

But we finally got a small snowman made.
A prettier one you could find almost anyday.

We used coca cola caps for his eyes.
Sticks for his arms and when we were through we stood there with pride.

It wasn`t that we were proud of the work we had done.
It was because Chase had so much fun.

It started raining 2 days after the snow.
Chase who is only 2 asks where did my snowman go?

He looked at me with tears in his eyes.
"Grandma did my snowman die?"

I took him in my arms and told him no.
Your snowman will be back the next time it snows.

This is a true little story,please overlook the long sentences.




Juanita

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© Copyright 2002 Juanita - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-01-09 01:20 PM


awww you are such a good grandma to Chase!
I miss the snow very much, I used to live in NY! I hope it snows again soon so you and chase can build another snowman! : )

RP

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2 posted 2002-01-09 01:22 PM


Juanita, don't worry about long sentences...it was perfect, just as you wrote it.  And I know it is a true story.
Isn't it amazing how little Chase, thought the snowman had died?
At his tender age, he already has a concept of what death might be.  I would say that he is very smart!

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3 posted 2002-01-09 01:40 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, you are such a loving sweet person, sweet friend, Chase is so happy to have you, may the snowman come back every year and may sweet memories in the snow always fill your loving heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-09 01:48 PM


Juanita,
We were laughing here in Ohio when we saw the snow go through your beautiful state.  Actually we were also laughing about my parents just arriving in Myrtle Beach for the sunshine. There snowman like a snowman (go back and read it slower). I bet lots of women wish their men would just melt away when they were done playing with them.
Glad you got to enjoy your grandchild.

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5 posted 2002-01-09 02:28 PM


Juanita darling girl this is utterly gorgeous, I really really love it

And what's wrong with long sentences, you should take a look at some of my earlier poems. They had extra long sentences.

Absolutely wonderful story, I love the picture you drew of you all playing with Chase.

And Roger I know you had snow in Ohio yesterday, 4 inches I was told, see I know what goes on

Juanita absolutely fabulous writing, I love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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6 posted 2002-01-09 02:44 PM


How sweet N carolina, my grandson and I also do those things and arent they precious. I loved your snowman at the bottom. I mean, Your snowman came to life. LOL floria
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7 posted 2002-01-09 04:02 PM


Very sweetly written - enjoyed. Chris

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N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2002-01-09 04:10 PM


RosePetal,thank you so much! I don`t care much for snow but I did enjoy watching Chase play in it.






Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2002-01-09 04:12 PM


Lyra,I`m just glad we don`t get as much snow as you.TAKE CARE!





Juanita

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10 posted 2002-01-09 04:22 PM


How very sweet. Wish I had a grandma like you.
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N orth Carolina Girl
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11 posted 2002-01-09 04:25 PM


Noah,I do hope me and Chase get to play together alot.I prefer not in the snow.Thanks sweety!






Juanita

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sodpossom
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12 posted 2002-01-09 05:49 PM


Very cute and sweet!That Chase sounds like a very smart 2 year old.He probably took after his daddy.
Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-01-09 06:32 PM


North Carolina Girl - what a darling poem. I'm sure the little one enjoyed the snow immensly..

BC
  

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14 posted 2002-01-09 06:43 PM


Lovely little poem Juanita!  So nice to see  parents and grandparents spend time with the children today.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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15 posted 2002-01-09 11:11 PM


Juanita - Short sentences, long sentences, either way this is very sweet.  So I guess all that snow you guys got in the south last week is all but gone.  Hopefully, NC gets some more snow so you grandson can build another one.

Dave

N orth Carolina Girl
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16 posted 2002-01-10 10:00 AM


Roger,we really had a good time with the snow.But I don`t care much for it.But it was fun this time since Chase enjoyed it so much.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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17 posted 2002-01-10 10:02 AM


Marsha,you are just too darn sweet.Be gentle with Dave I don`t think he can handle too much of you.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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18 posted 2002-01-10 10:03 AM


floria,thank you for reading this.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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19 posted 2002-01-10 10:05 AM


Chris,thanks for reading this I appreciate it.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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20 posted 2002-01-10 10:07 AM


Newewl,thank you and what a sweet thing to say.I bet I would be proud to be your grandma.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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21 posted 2002-01-10 10:13 AM


Stevie,now what makes you think he is like his daddy?Do you have some inside infomation?




Love,
mama


N orth Carolina Girl
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22 posted 2002-01-10 11:50 AM


Bill,thanks for reading

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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23 posted 2002-01-10 11:52 AM


Nancy,thanks so much.We really enjoyed watching Chase in the snow.

Juanita

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N orth Carolina Girl
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24 posted 2002-01-10 11:57 AM


Dave,I personally hope we don`t get anymore snow.Me & Chase can stay in hte house and play on the computer.





Juanita

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