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Ocean Beauty
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since 2001-11-24
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VT, USA

0 posted 2002-01-09 10:55 AM


My heart beats in the silence of your presence,
Longing to feel the warmth of your love again.
Sitting alone, my despair overwhelming me,
I cry alone again.

Tears running down my face,
Words leaving my mind.
I don't know what to say, other than
I need you.

Walking down that path again,
Our private place in the park.
My only company are the memories,
Your everlasting imprint on my heart.

Tears running down my face,
Words leaving my mind.
I don't know what to say, other than
I need you.

© Copyright 2002 Dawn Williams - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-01-09 10:58 AM


Ocean Beauty,
If he reads this, he will show up. Enjoyed

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-01-09 11:08 AM


Sadly beautiful, Ocean Beauty.
This is the first poem of yours that I have read, I hope to see more of them.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunset
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3 posted 2002-01-09 12:24 PM


Powerful display of emotion, Ocean Beauty.
Lady In White
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4 posted 2002-01-09 12:26 PM



Sometimes this is all that needs saying...

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
5 posted 2002-01-09 01:07 PM


I knew there was a good reason for me to pop in here before work!!
I knew there were words to hear.
But I am worried .... such beauty upon the ocean shouldn't feel this loss.
Be well ... always!!!!

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-01-09 01:12 PM


OceanBeauty~
Just lovely, lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vandana
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7 posted 2002-01-09 01:41 PM


welcome to passions nice
Suetang
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8 posted 2002-01-09 04:26 PM


Ocean Beauty
So very sad but so very beautiful were your words. I'll look forward to reading more.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2002-01-10 11:01 AM


And those three words say so much. *S* This is lovely.
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