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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-08 10:33 PM


(For the love of my dreams...my sweet Joanna "RosePetal")

When You Lift Your Veil
By: Noah Eaton
1/8/02

When you lift your veil
I can see your bright smile
Caressing your skin
Balmed in mother-of-pearl
Swooning to your warm sweet love

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2002 10:34 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-08 10:36 PM


awwwww...this was so sweet. I smile that brightly because of you, you make me happy. That is all a girl could ever ask for!
love you

Joanna

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2 posted 2002-01-08 10:45 PM


Aw Noah this is so sweet, nicely written tanka.  I loved that romance in it.

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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3 posted 2002-01-08 11:06 PM


Nice writing Noah...James
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4 posted 2002-01-08 11:17 PM


Noah,
Cool...now about those eyes!

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5 posted 2002-01-08 11:20 PM


Noah...This is a VERY BEAUTIFUL TANKA. Your love for Joanna shines through each carfully placed word.   ***Ivy Rose
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