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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-01-08 10:20 PM


Inspired by my sweet Noah!

You captivate me
Like no one has ever done
Comfort me tonight
With your warm blanket of love
A joined pair of turtle doves

© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-08 10:24 PM




(kisses your lips happily) Ooohhhhhh...I love you, I love you, I love you, this is sooooooo gorgeous, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You will always be the turtle dove in my hearts nest, my sweet Guinevere, I love you sooooooooo much! (kisses you on lips) I'm printing out a copy of this to hold onto forever! (kiss on lips) Mmmmmmmmmm! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-08 10:28 PM


This is so romantis Joanna.  I hope you and Noah live a long time in your joyful love.  Noah is a very lucky guy to have you.  Great write, i liked it!

   From your friend,
      Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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3 posted 2002-01-08 10:29 PM


What a beautiful piece of writing, very sweet!  Keep up the great work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-01-08 11:19 PM


Joanna,
Awful lot of kissin' going on here! Like your Tanka.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-01-08 11:24 PM


I like this Rose Petal...James
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6 posted 2002-01-09 02:55 PM


RosePetal,this was so lovely.






Juanita

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Charisma
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7 posted 2002-01-09 03:53 PM


Marvelous Tanka, love it

Charisma

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8 posted 2002-01-09 08:16 PM


I love it.
Enchantress
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9 posted 2002-01-09 08:52 PM


Joanna, I love it!  And, love loves you!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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10 posted 2002-01-09 08:57 PM


*giggling* I love it and I can see by all the kissing that he does too. Sweetly romantic. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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