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nichole2005
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since 2002-01-04
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0 posted 2002-01-08 10:02 PM


When I look out a window
Or up at the sky
I see you and feel  you all inside
It seems like you're right here beside me
But you're not
I mis you more and more every day
When I see a cloud shaped like you I tear up
It's hard for people to think it is not their fault
But it's not
Just remember that I miss you a lot.
Note: This poem was made for my Uncle who died in '99. We were very close. He was killed by a oncoming car full of drunk teens. He was on a motorcycle. Please Please be careful if you drink and drive. Don't you don't know who you hurt.




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-01-08 10:43 PM



It's never too often to give reminders to people to be careful...we always seem to forget that it was someone's loved one involved in the accident...

Thank you Nichole...

RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-01-08 10:50 PM


Nichole, I am sorry to hear about your loss! It saddens me that people are so careless.
I posted a poem last week that I think you might like. Check it out if you have time! /pip/Forum52/HTML/003150.html

RP

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-01-08 11:00 PM


Yes it is always sad to lose a loved one...expecially unexpectedly...James
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