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Rain (what i feel)
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Rain (what i feel) |
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darkling Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90altered state of mind 
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Tears from the sky mean joy, They mean refreshment, life anew. Tears from my eyes mean pain, They mean depression, life without you. When the clouds let free their gentle drops And rain upon the land, I sit alone in solitude, with hearache, Pain you just can't understand. When the sweet caress of water Plays upon the glass, I stare briefly out the window Thinking of when I saw you last. And as the rain beats steadily down With splotches across the ground... I place my head in my hands And cry without a sound. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ohhhh I LOVE this darkling! You have just penned my thoughts! Im going to save this to my library, it is soo good. I hope you are feeling better, because after every rainstorm the sunshine will come out again.  RP |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
This flows very well darkling. Very well indeed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, I LOVE IT, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! (smiles) Your loving heart shines with both tears of sorrow but I know deep down with all my heart your heart will be pattered with hope and joy to rinse the sorrow away! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I too am adding this to my library!!! You have such abeautiful heart, sweet darkling, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oops forgot to put it in my library, hehe. |
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