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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-08 09:48 PM


Your love adorns my body
Like the finest silver chain
Making me feel so much alive
As you take away my pain

I carry with me a locket
Around my neck with a picture of you
It lays inside a golden heart
And contains the initials of me and you

Many dreams I had before you
There was no love that I was seeing
If I never actually met you
I think I'd have dreamed you into being

Sometimes I'm as giddy as a schoolgirl
When I'm surrounded by your love
As we walk together in the moonlight
Beneath the heavenly skies above

So soothing is your voice
That whisper words of love so true
As I shout from the top of the mountain
How very much I'm in love with you

This love we share is timeless
I walk on air when you're with me
I love you higher than any mountain
And deeper than the sea

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-08 09:58 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe we all feel special when we're loved; every time I dream of my dream girl Joanna, I always feel like the happiest boy when I'm holding her! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love always fill your gorgeous heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-08 10:00 PM


Sue,

wow, you seem to be so deep in love! I am very happy for you, you deserve it.
I hope you show this beautiful poem to your guy, he will treasure it for sure.

love,
RP

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-08 10:19 PM


Suetang...WONDERFUL AMBIANCE in this romantic and love-filled poem. Super writing, Sue!!!!!  ***Ivy Rose
Larry C
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4 posted 2002-01-08 11:57 PM


Sue,
Nice write. But how do you get any excersize walking on air?

Ocelot
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5 posted 2002-01-09 12:38 PM


sigh...I love love.     This was so pretty and I felt my heart just melt thinking about the words.  Lovely, just lovely.

+| ... Ocelot ...

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-01-09 02:38 AM


Suetang - something special you truly have...

BC

vandana
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7 posted 2002-01-09 01:45 PM


nice write
suthern
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8 posted 2002-01-10 10:58 AM


This is beautiful... you have something (and someone *S*) very special. *S*
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