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Hypnosis
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0 posted 2002-01-08 08:34 PM


Mirror
by Randy Meador


Look in the mirror my darling
Tell me what you see
Honestly, truthfully, seriously

Because when I look at you
I see my love
Standing there comely
Honest eyes reflecting back
Majestic hair that waves artistically in the wind
Sweet lips that has a magical touch of heaven
All combining to make a beautiful smile
Which can make even the devil’s day

I also see the past
Great memories of the years left behind
Of nine years of you I have known
And you are now mine
And I am yours

So look in the mirror my darling
Tell me what you see

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

© Copyright 2002 Randy A Meador - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-08 08:51 PM


When I look into the mirror what do I see?  Honestly, truthfully, seriously?

I see the face of the one I've loved for so long.
I see the face of the one I'll always hold dear.
This face is the sweetest I've ever known!  
A face of the person who has been through the best years of my life, and I hope will continue to be there for many more.  


That is what I see in the mirror.  

This is a wonderful poem!   .  I love it!!!

Forever Yours,

Noelle


  

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

Streen
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2 posted 2002-01-08 08:51 PM


I'm sure she'll see love looking right back at her. Good write.

-Streen

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3 posted 2002-01-08 09:20 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy to see you've found true happiness and love! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, may her reflection always smile through the mirror to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Randy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-08 09:44 PM


Aww..a mirror of love! This was an awesome poem Randy straight from your golden heart.
You and Noelle are very lucky to have eachother and I am lucky to have Noah!!!

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5 posted 2002-01-08 09:47 PM


Hypnosis - Very well done - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-01-08 09:48 PM


Randy, she must see a lot of love..Wonderful poem.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-01-09 02:04 AM


Hypnosis - she is certainly looking at someone special that has written a poem about someone special. Nicely written...

BC

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