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Sunset
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since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

0 posted 2002-01-08 08:21 PM

Pastel dreams tossed gently in generosity
Real, if only for
One moment when I
Meant so much to you
I slip into yesterday if only to remember a
Song familiar, hearing now a beginning, a middle and an
End

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-08 08:59 PM

excellent acrostic! Welcome to Passions

I like this very much....

Streen
Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

2 posted 2002-01-08 09:01 PM

Very very good. ^_^ You really brought it together at the end. Please post more here at Passions. ^_^

-Streen

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-08 09:05 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Wonderful First Post!
I shall be looking forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-01-08 09:07 PM

Sunset~
This is a wonderful introduction into the circle of friendship among poets~
WELCOME to our family~

Nicely done acrostic~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-08 09:31 PM

YAY!!! (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a lovely debut, your words sparkle with loving promise and beauty! (smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Sunset, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunset, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-08 09:34 PM

I most certainly agree...a good entrance..
Welcome to Passions...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-01-08 09:35 PM

Very nicely done. Welcome. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-01-08 09:46 PM

Wow, I like this. Welcome to poetry land. You will love it here!!!
Looking forward to seeing more..

RP

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

9 posted 2002-01-08 10:21 PM

Thank you so much everyone for such a warm welcome. Have really enjoyed reading through the poetry on this forum.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-01-08 10:40 PM

Sunset, welcome, Welcome to Passions! I hope you find the poetic home that you may have been looking for, as I know I did. Please, check your e-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

11 posted 2002-01-08 11:32 PM

Excellent beginning to your debut into Passions. A beautiful job of writing.

***Ivy Rose

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2002-01-08 11:56 PM

welcome, and make yourself at home, just remember to rest your fingers
mine have been typing for nearly two years!!!!!!!!!!

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2002-01-11 12:39 PM

you slipped away, here you go, this is wonderful....

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

14 posted 2002-01-11 02:36 PM

This is a wonderful image that you've shown here. Very soft and delicate.

Welcome to Passions, it's nice to have you here. The people here are wonderful.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

15 posted 2002-01-11 04:40 PM

Thank you so much Sunshine, Ivy Rose, Irish Rose and Romeo! Have really enjoyed reading all of your poetry.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2002-01-12 12:53 PM

welcome. . . this speaks of promises kept. . . or perhaps of ones not yet spoken. . . or, perhaps of ones made again. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

17 posted 2002-01-12 07:43 AM

Sunset,
Welcome to Passions! I see in this piece you made a promise and you kept it. Well done. I like acrostics.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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